Wow, so Paul is a Small now and this story has taken a dark tone. It’s incredible! I actually got nervous and scared for Paul. I feel really bad for him and his new reality. It really teaches you something when you get to experience a new side of life.

I love the scenes with Katelyn! It was so deep and touching! She is the only one who probably could help Paul adjust to the situation. I could feel the tension as they realize that it was only a matter of time until they got separated.

I’m alright with Sarah being his new owner. I thought it would be someone we haven’t met yet, but I guess it makes sense since his mom doesn’t want people to know and she trusts Sarah, being the eldest daughter.

I’m curious how Paul’s life will be like with Sarah. I wonder if he will meet her companion and maybe he will say something such as “Bro, I fucked your sister” or something like that. Sarah seems to be a nice woman, so I think her companion is probably a nice guy too.

It would be interesting if Paul gets to see a new side of Sarah, whether it’s she treats him like an object or maybe she plays with her companion right in front of Paul. There might be times when Sarah might get drunk and accidentally think Paul is her companion. ;) That should be fun. (Maybe not for Paul).

I love the frequent uploads. Probably helps that you got the story already written out. It also keeps my interest before I forget about the previous chapters.

Nonetheless, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I won't give anything away, but you're about to learn a lot about Sarah and her companion.