[Report This]Date: January 07 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fabulous chapter. I really liked having Kristine thinking about all the different ways he could be crushed or eaten. Really excellent stuff. I enjoyed the journey of walking down Kristine's leg. She is an Awesome woman and she does remind me of my Aunt.
I also like that he is basically trained to enter the cage when Kristine places him in front of it. I still would enjoy her saying enter the cage little one.
Also how about a chapter where Kristine places him on the tile floor of her kitchen. Letting him wander around. He can look over at how Gigantic her higheeled shoes or wedges or sandals are as she stands near him. Maybe as he continues to wander the phone rings and Kristine begins talking. Her voice is that of a Goddess up in the clouds. Maybe a small spider comes out from under her refrigerator. He starts to run for his life, screaming in fear. Kristine doesn't notice for a second or two. He continues to run knowing the 8 legged creature will eventually catch him. Suddenly an enormous loud thud lands on the floor crushing the spider. He falls down from the ground shaking power of Kristine's shoe. Are you all right my little man? The right arm goes up. Kristine holds the cage between her thumb and forefinger and lowers it in front of him. In you go little man, she says with a stern voice. He immediately obeys and is happy and relieved for the safety of the cage as Kristine places it around her neck.
Do you like it?
Diesel
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for the lengthy review and the stars, much appreciated.
I like your ideas. Truth is, I was thinking of inserting some unaware stuff in the story soon, but I don't have an idea where to put it yet. I'm also a fan of situations where a giantess has to save her shrinkee from an insect and would like to include that too, though I've used that very thing in my previous story and I worry about repeating myself. But you know what, I'll think of something.
Thank you once again for following the story. I still have some ideas for it left, so expect a dozen more chapters to come soon. Maybe not exactly a dozen, but I'm nowhere near coming to an end with it.