[Report This]Date: January 23 2020 2:46 AM Title: The Challenge
I just read all 7 chapters and I love the balance of story and sexual content.
I also like how you involve multiple body parts to torment the guys. The chapters with Adam are amazing, especially with their butts.
For some reason, I like Ms Crowell more than Camilla. She has this authority over Adam that Camilla doesn’t seem to have. I can easily see Adam feeling helpless when Ms. Crowell dishes out her punishments.
My favorite chapter is still the first one with Ms. Crowell dominating Adam in the beginning. It was such a great opener that it convinced me to read the rest of this story.
Speaking of your story, I love how often you upload chapters to this story. Even with the shorter chapters, it’s good to get consistency knowing that a new chapter is on its way
Anyway, you did mention suggestions and I think others have mentioned this as well, but I also would love to see Ms. Crowell have her own personal toy. I bet you never expected her to be so popular, but I just simply find her more sexy than Camilla.
You mentioned in a response to a review that Ms. Crowell could only shrink a person during school hours, but what if she broke that rule, or perhaps made an exception. Maybe Adam gets a 6th X in her notebook and he is forced to spend the night with her or something. Maybe it’s not even Adam. Ms. Crowell taking some random guy home as her toy would also very erotic.
On a side note, I love the dialogue in this story. Camilla’s words that she uses on Adam and Michael are amazing. When she guided Michael’s hands to her pussy and told him that she can hide him in her panties, I got a little excited. The way she said that was hot, especially as she forced his hand down there.
I like Camilla’s naughtiness and Ms. Crowell’s dominance. If Ms. Crowell can get that same naughty mentality, she might be one of my favorite giantesses of all time. I could list numerous suggestions since giantess teachers are one of my favorite fantasies. However, I think it would be unfair if you don’t plan on using Ms. Crowell that much.
However, if you do plan on using such a promising character, then I would love to see Ms. Crowell shrink a student to keep as her own pussy slave and hide him inside her own panties. She could even hide him during the class if she wanted to. She could tie him up to prevent him from even thinking of escaping and she could even keep him snug up against her pussy held by her right panties trapping him inside. Even sexy teachers need some sexual tension to be released. This could be a new form of detention.
Well, I’m glad I stumbled upon this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hmmm, you’ve certainly given me something to think about. I really hadn’t intended Ms.Crowell to be the kind of giantess who would shrink someone for something outside of school based punishment. That being said, I also wasn’t expecting people to enjoy her so much since she had played such a small part thus far. I’ll tell you what, I certainly won’t rule it out if it turns out that people continue to request it.
I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed the story thus far, and this is exactly why I request people to leave reviews and make suggestions. If it’s clear that the readers all want something specific, I’m happy to do my best to make it happen.
Thanks so much for reading!