Date: January 31 2020 12:17 PM Title: Third Party Encounter
Kerri is back, Yippy! I like how she made Mr. Lanning agree it would be ok if she farts on him. Nice touch.
Camilla might think Mr. Lanning finally escaped, in which case Kerri could keep Mr. Lanning. She may want to keep in mind what Camilla could do to her if she finds out she has Mr. Lanning. Quite the situation.
Your story is terrific, and your writting style very enjoyable. That said, one can tell from having read your previous chapters that you rushed this one. Quite a few grammatical errors {really no biggie, and does not detract from story flow} and you called Kerri Camilla {"'Oh yea, I'll try not to do that haha'. Camilla giggles at the thought of gasing her tiny teacher."}
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. And like I said, dont be afraid to point out mistakes like swapped names, etc. However I went back through and the grammar seems appropriate to me. If you see something specific, let me know.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 4:37 AM Title: Third Party Encounter
Well, this is unexpected. A new giantess who seems very similar to Camilla. What I wonder is how different is Kerri from Camilla? They are both lovely girls from his class and they both want to keep him in their ass. I hope there is something new because otherwise Kerri so far seems like another Camilla.
As for predictions, I think Kerri will just fart on Michael constantly and then Kerri tells Camilla what happened and then they both mess with him.
If Kerri were to escape, it would be interesting to see him return to Ms Crowell, but I doubt that would happen. Glad you mentioned the hot female teacher though. It’s making me excite again.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Can't believe how excited people are for Ms.Crowell... def gonna have to get her back into the mix soon. Thanks for the continued support!!!