Date: February 05 2020 7:53 PM Title: The Oven
I missed commenting on the past few chapters, I only got around to reading them tonight. All I can say is you did an incredible job of keeping the psychological torment going.
Kerri being Mrs. Cromwel's daughter. Jack about to be shrunk {well possibly}. The chili induced farts. Camilla stating Mr. Lanning belongs in between her butt cheeks, and that Adam is HER'S.
Fantastic!
There is one, if not two elements missing though. Kerri's own tiny. Mrs. Cromwel's own tiny / tinies.
Will Kerri give up her own little brother to Camilla? Would Mrs. Cromwel give up her own son to Camilla?
Fantastic story, possible one of the best on this site.
Author's Response: Like Tom Speedy mentioned, Ms.Crowell and Kerri are not related. Kerri took Michael to what he assumed was Alyssa’s house but instead she took him to her own house to torment him some more. And for the time being Kerri is only going to be able to interact with the people that Camilla has shrunken. As far as Ms. Crowell goes, we’ll see her some more once Michael’s weekend is over.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2020 2:15 PM Title: The Oven
Jack. New character. One issue is that he is family. Would it be weird for Kerri to punish her own brother. I feel like Camilla would be perfect to toy with Jack since she is not related to either of them, but Camilla is already perfect with Michael.
Maybe they introduce Jack to Ms. Crowell and she can tutor him on sex education and pleasing women in general.
Otherwise, I don’t see Kerri taking him. Hmm, maybe Kerri’s mom. But I think it would have to be unaware so Kerri’s mom doesn’t freak out.
I prefer Ms. Crowell since I’m down for her to punish anyone at this time, and it would be interesting if she gets little Jack.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted to wait to respond to this one until after I had posted Chapter 19. I hope you liked the way the Camilla and Kerri dealt with a meddling Jack. My plan is to write this story one arc at a time. So right now I’m posting Michael’s arc, and when his weekend with Camilla is over I’ll focus on a different character for several chapters. So I’ll likely take a little break after I finish with Michael but when we do eventually get to Ms. Crowell, she will have a nice long string of chapters. Let me know if there’s anything in particular that you’re hoping to see from the giantess teacher.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2020 8:53 PM Title: The Oven
GOD!! Finally managed to catch up with your story... and you stay true to your synopsis. Camilla and even Kerri are two sociopaths. But I love the brief foot plays you put here and there and, as your last work, you remain very skillfull when it comes to torture envolving ass and fart descriptions. I envy you mate XDD
Now, an idea: maybe young Jack isn't a fool and before Camilla can shrink only him, he realizes what she means and jumps on her. In the end both end up shrunk somehow and at Kerri's mercy. Oh yeah, karma my friend. K A R M A kkkkkk
Another great work :)
Author's Response: Well hello there, I was wondering if I would hear from you on this story haha. Glad to see you’re reading and enjoying this far. And while Camilla can’t actually shrink people with just her phone, it’s an interesting idea to have Camilla get a taste of her own medicine. Could be fun :) Great to read your reviews again, hope you enjoy what’s coming next. The hanks for reading!