Wow! This is one of the best dialogue-filled chapters you have had in a while.

I mean, we had a little bit of everything. We had Zack messed with by Camilla in class, then Ms. Crowell announcing Zacks’s detention to the whole class, then I love how you skipped the rest of class, I mean, we all just wanted to see what happens after school, so I loved that. Then we had Camilla pretend it was her in charge of Zack, and then we see Adam show up like it’s routine and then Ms. Crowell finally shrinks Zack! And this is all in one chapter!

But let’s break it down. First we got Zack contemplating his future knowing that his dad can’t save him anymore. The guy may be powerful, but Ms. Crowell always gets her way. Zack being a jock probably always got his way too, but now he knows that size that used to be his strength will be gone.

Then Camilla shows up, and she knows that because of her letting Zack cheat and then changing her answers led him to get caught and therefore shrunk meaning that Camilla basically set him up for this. I love it!

Then we get Adam showing up and he just casually gives Camilla the work he did for her and the best part is that we see this from Zack’s perspective which shows how powerful Camilla truly is.

For the last part of the class scene, we got Ms. Crowell showing up and the first thing she does is announce Zack’s detention to the class. You know she is looking forward to it and she also wants Zack to be nervous about it all day. Even the fear of detention is growing in his mind as Alyssa announces it.

Then we move onto after school and Zack enters Alyssa’s room and sees Camilla there. At first I believed her when she said that she was the one going to take Zack instead. It’s stuff like this that made Michael and Adam submit to her earlier but Zack didn’t fall for it.

Then we see Camilla reveal why she is truly there and it’s to take Adam with her. This made me realize that I wish I was in this class too. I would have joined Camilla and waited for Ms. Crowell too so I could see Alyssa shrink and torment Zack. It’s like a free giantess show. I’m imagining Alyssa toy with Zack and then I get aroused and then she catches me with a boner and she decides to shrink me next. Oh boy, that would be awesome and scary at the same time!

Then Adam shows up and he doesn’t even complain nor argue with Camilla. He sits behind her and smells her farts and let’s her toy with him. I even loved the tactic of Camilla getting Zack to smell her shoe to prevent Adam from Camilla’s torture. It was clever. If I was Zack, I wouldn’t have done it because I kinda like Adam being sexually tormented by Camilla. (Man, I guess I’m messed up. Lol.)

Then we get to the best part and it’s Ms. Crowell, aka Alyssa stealing the show once again, showing Camilla who is the boss and keeping the remote for herself. Alyssa shrinks Adam and let’s Camilla take him as if it’s a daily thing, which is kinda hot, and finally we get to what I’ve been waiting for a while now.

We get Zack shrinking and Ms. Crowell is ready for some fun. Alyssa has this way of words that make her dominant, yet sexual, and I love how you chose these words for her. It makes her seem so powerful and sexy! The “I am going to enjoy this” was perfect. You could tell she loves this and it was all because she was able to convince the mayor that his son cheated and made her shrinking solution a viable tactic. And it looks like she is going to start with her sexy foot, and hopefully after that, she will move him up to her intimate body parts.

Part of me was hoping the “Camilla taking Zack part” was true so that way we could get Alyssa to toy with Adam again. Adam seems so compliment that I bet Alyssa could turn Adam into the perfect tiny pet for her. Zack will put up more of a fight so maybe Alyssa wants to see the transition of Zack being a rebel to Zack being obedient eventually. Either way, I’m glad Alyssa has a tiny in her control again. Maybe Camilla and Alyssa will switch tinies. Hehe. That could be fun.

I can’t wait for the next chapter! (Also, happy 50th review!)

Author's Response:

Hello again! And thank you for review #50! WOOO! I'm glad that people are enjoying the chapter's that aren't pure smut, becuase even though thats why we're all here, it's nice to set the scene every now and then. I'm sorry for the delay in uploads, but I'm just having a hard time writing something that I'm happy with. Hopefully I'll get things back on track soon, but rest assured, I'll continue working on this story no matter what. It might just take a while. As always thank you so much for your continued support. It means so much to me that you're enjoying the story and that you take the time to leave your reviews. Stay tuned for more!!!

In a similar boat with the quarantine and lack of motivation. Do what makes you feel better during this time, even if it’s not writing. We’ll be here when you do though! :D

As always, another great buildup chapter. Can’t wait to see what Camilla has planned for Zack, wonder if it’ll make Michael’s treatment look tame by comparison.

Author's Response:

It's definitely unfortunate, because I typically enjoy writing very much. I just feel like being cooped up inside has put a damper on my mood and thus all of the things that typically make me happy. Making a concentrated effort to go outside more, even if its just taking a walk around the block. Hopefully it'll help me get out of this weird headspace. I appreciate everyone's support on the story. If the community wasnt so kind, I'd likely have given up a while ago.