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Reviewer: Juliodragon69 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 6:37 AM Title: TGIF

The story is incredible !!! I would like to see a loving relationship between Kerry and his younger brother, as happened with Ashley in the story "losing control". I really like these two characters. A turnaround involving Kerri's mother would be interesting. I love twists, .. Finally I found the writer who likes to write many chapters d84;a039;d84;a039; a rarity nowadays.

Reviewer: Schroedinger Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 7:29 PM Title: TGIF

I'm really enjoy this story but you haven't add to in in a couple months. Do you have any plans to continue it in the future? 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 5:41 PM Title: TGIF

Yes! Weekend time is here! I’m really excited to see what Alyssa plans with Zack.

I liked the scene where his fiends asked him about his plans and the girls were announcing that Zack is basically a toy for Alyssa the whole weekend! I’m glad she is taking him home with her and not limiting her punishments to school session. Now we get a compete weekend of fun with Alyssa and Zack. If he thought detention was long, it just got worse. ;)

I also enjoyed how his friends tried to cheer him up by saying how how Ms. Crowell is. I’d probably say the same thing if I was his friend. Actually, I’d disguise myself as Zack and take his place. ;)

I love the Camilla scenes right before Alyssa shows up. (Why is Alyssa always late? Lol). Anyway, the way Camilla was just crushing Adam’s groin with her foot was amazing. And Adam took it like a champ.

In addition, Camilla is thinking what some of us are thinking, and Alyssa is saying what you are thinking. Camilla wants to trade Adam for Zack and Alyssa is saying, not yet. Creative way to answer our suggestions. Nice.

Sometimes I imagine something like Spring break to occur, and Alyssa takes Zack and Adam home with her. And during this time, she basically tells Zack to watch and uses Adam in every way possible just to scare Zack. I could even imagine Alyssa sticking Adam inside her for the night and then she tells Zack that Adam was just put to bed. Zack would be in complete shock while I would be in complete joy. Haha!

Looks like the fun is about to begin this weekend. I wonder if her bedroom is kinky. Maybe Alyssa will use tape, string, floss, rubber bands, to restrain Zack and prevent him from escaping. Mmhmm, so many possibilities!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 10:55 AM Title: TGIF

Love it so far! Do you think there will be any vaginal stuff with Alyssa and Zack?



Author's Response: Yes, that’s coming up next!

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