[Report This]Date: April 02 2020 8:23 PM Title: Expelled
Glad to see another update!
Man, this quarantine thing is kinda crazy, but my introverted self hasn’t been affected that much compared to most people. I spend most of my day online so seeing updates like this helps me cope with what’s going on these days.
Back to this chapter. I keep forgetting Alyssa is Ms. Crowell, haha. I thought it was 2 different women at first. Now I just gotta remember that for future reference.
Love how Alyssa stood her ground to the mayor. Also, it’s interesting to see that her reputation as the “shrinking teacher” is kinda well known. I thought it was a secret, but I guess word has spread.
I’m curious to see if Zack will be the one to shrink as punishment for Alyssa. I’m still rooting for Adam to be her pet, but I’m glad she will have someone soon. Hmm, maybe she will have both Adam and Zack.
So far, I think the ideal situation I would love to see is Adam being trapped inside the front part of Alyssa’s panties. Even better, he could be tied up in there and she takes him home with her!
Anyway, then there’s Camilla and Michael. I can’t believe she grew him back to normal. He is a risk, but I guess he is still too scared of Camilla to do anything to her despite being bigger than her. Love how she just left him naked like that. One last little piece of trouble that she left for him. Gotta love her creativity.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Just want to say thanks for all the long reviews. It’s really nice to hear what people are thinking of the story so far and I appreciate you taking the time. Yea the world’s a little crazy right now and I was hoping that the working from home would give me a little extra time to focus on this hobby, but it seems harder to write then ever before. Oh well, it is what it is :) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: March 30 2020 7:38 PM Title: Returned
Glad to see you are still writing. I am stuck and can't write anything I deem worth, but still reading the stories on the site.
So... we are saying goodbye to Michael? I think he is a dead man, Camilla will just kill him. I wonder how Kerri would react if the teacher never showed up again.
Your writing is as good as always. Thanks and keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hello again my friend! It’s good to hear from you again. I hope you’re staying safe! I know the feeling of writing things that you’re not crazy about. I’ve got a crapload of stories that I’ve started and just never uploaded because I couldn’t figure out where to go with them. Who knows, maybe I’ll just put them up and let people enjoy them for what their worth, or maybe theyll never see the light of day haha! And Michael.... he’s definitely a liability to Camilla. He knows the truth behind her kind facade, and he could really be a problem for her down the road. It seems like you’ve got a pretty good read on Camilla, so I guess only time will tell how he makes out :) As always I appreciate your reviews and I hope that you find yourself with some sudden inspiration to write!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2020 12:38 AM Title: Returned
Part of me is worried that if Michael grows back to regular size, then he would be risky to Camilla and Kerri. But now that I think about it, if there is any leak or news about Michael going missing, then the girls will shrink him down forever or something.
Ok, glad to see Adam back! Seeing him tormented just makes me smile, especially when he is being dominated. Being taped to that still is just amazing since it feels almost routine now. You mentioned that the stool is right next to the teacher’s desk so maybe Ms. Crowell will use that stool as well.
So it looks like this Kyle guy might get shrunk soon. Then there is Zach from the previous chapter. I don’t know much about either, but Adam seems to know how place already.
Glad to also hear that Ms. Crowell will have her way with someone soon. I hope this includes her taking someone home to be her sex toy. Whoever that will be, I will envy that person. I hope it’s Adam, he already has 4 “X’s” or whatever it was for being absent in the beginning of this story. Perhaps he will get himself in trouble again and earn himself a new kind of detention. ;)
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews Mr. Speedy, it makes me incredibly happy to read your encouraging thoughts and hopes for the story! Yes, I am trying to add in some more characters so that it isn’t just one person getting dominated and I want to try to experiment with different reactions to being shrunken. That being said I have some chapters coming up that are tailor made with your comments in mind. They’re not written yet but I’m pretty much done with the build up to those chapters so I hope I won’t be keeping you waiting much longer.
Again thanks for all the support, reviews like yours make it possible to keep going with the story!
Date: March 25 2020 11:09 AM Title: Monday Morning Blues
Hello OMANAHAN88
Thank you for your recommendations. We are all at home around the world. This story becomes more and more interesting chaptere after chapter a I am ready to help you with suggestions ... But I would like if you accept to tell us what the characters (especially the girls) in your story look like by sending photos or indicating famous personality names. For example: Megan looks like Cameron Diaz. But it will be better if you send photos that you would have chosen yourself on the internet. This is important so that we readers can integrate the story. THX
Author's Response: Hello Free!!! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story thus far! As far as pictures go, I really don’t have anything to offer here. The characters are usually loosely based on people in my life, and I keep the descriptions vague so that the reader can sort of implement their own visualizations. However if it’s helpful to you, here’s what I can give. Ms. Crowell is similar to Cameron Diaz’s character in bad teacher, although Ms. Crowell is much more serious about her career. Camilla I would say is somewhat similar in appearance to Gal Gadot, but with slightly darker skin. Kerri is pretty much any picture of a college volleyball player out there. Take your pick haha! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you stick around to read the rest!
[Report This]Date: March 24 2020 6:42 PM Title: Monday Morning Blues
Yes! Ms. Crowell is back! Man, do I miss her! I wished it was Adam who has to suffer her fate, but I guess Zach is alright.
Kerri and Camilla are still good, but Ms. Crowell has this authority to make anyone worship her. I like that. I would like to get to know Zach a bit more before I see some sexual tension. So far, he seems like a kid that made a mistake. I think Adam should be punished for checking out Camilla’s ass again. Lol
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter! (And welcome back!)
Date: March 21 2020 3:17 PM Title: Lazy Sunday
I'm really liking this strory and looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Wish granted! New chapter is up! I hope it’s up to par, as my schedule has been disturbed and I’m trying to write one chapter across several days and it makes it a little harder to keep my thoughts cohesive. I pray that the quality remains consistent with the other chapters. Let me know what you think, and thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: March 19 2020 2:30 AM Title: Rule Breaker
Great story so far. Any idea when we'll get more?
Author's Response: Unfortunately thanks to someone outside our simulation playing Plague Inc, my free time is downright nonexistent these days. I’m going to try to be posting again but I definitely can’t keep up with my usual daily upload schedule. I appreciate the patience and the support. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 2:16 PM Title: Lazy Sunday
Seems like Michael finally got some comfort after a weekend of torture. This almost gives me some hope that Camilla will be a bit more gentle to her next victim
Thank your for writing!
Author's Response: Well even if Camilla doesn’t soften up, I’m sure there’ll be a giantess down the line who fits the bill :) Thanks for reading!
Date: February 13 2020 8:31 PM Title: Lazy Sunday
Could it be that Mr. Lanning is seeing a brighter side to being shrunk and in the hands of one of his students; or rather in the cleavage of one of his more compasionate students?
Is Kerri strating to like a tiny to do with as she pleases, perhaps torment of her little brother coming to mind?
It may be a lazy Sunday for Kerri and Mr. Lanning; but that doesn't mean it has to end, especially if he has a fetish / love / worhsip of Kerri's feet.
Author's Response: Mr. Lanning is definitely realizing that spending a weekend with a giantess isn’t inherently terrible. You’ve simply got to choose the right giantess ;) And Kerri is just starting to dip her toes into the wonderful world of being a real life goddess. She’s definitely interested in the sensation but what kind of giantess will she be? Will she follow in Camilla’s footsteps or will she forge her own path? Only time will tell. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 10 2020 11:02 AM Title: Abandoned
Is Camilla playing more mind games with Mr. Lanning, possibly even with Kerri?
Would be nice if Kerri swallows Mr. Lanning and fails to vomit him out. Long trip through Kerri's bowels, but does he come out alive or as Kerri's pooh?
Please don't get me wrong, I love the extended torture of Mr. Lanning, especially from Camilla's ass. When I mentioned "time to introduce a new character", I meant it more as a plaything for Kerri, so each girl would have one. In my opinion, Camilla should never stop tormenting Mr. Lanning and eventually she should just keep him stuffed up her butt cheeks permanantly.
Surprised by Kerri's compassion; but is it all part of Camilla's greater scheme for all parties involved?
Author's Response:
Camilla is an incredibly moody giantess and she doesnt take it well when her tiny playthings defy her. She's also pretty smart... so you might be onto something there :) Kerri is more of a follower. SHe's happy to torment a tiny person when she has her best frined Camilla to encourage her, but when she's all alone the reality of what she's doing to another human being is much harder to ignore. The question is, does Camilla know how her friend feels? And how can she use that to her advantage :)
Date: February 08 2020 12:23 PM Title: Rule Breaker
I think it would be very interesting to see Kerri some how get ahold of the shrinking remote and shrink down Jack. It would be nice to see what she would exactly do with him in the time of him being shruken down or we she just keep him forever for her own good?
Author's Response:
Kerri is a giantess who isnt really sure how to feel about interacting with tinies. She thinks it can be funny and she loves making Camilla happy, but she's also realizing that theyre still people. It could be fun to see how her resentment of her annoying little brother pushes her on the scale of Cruel-Nice. Stay tuned and we might find out!
Date: February 08 2020 6:16 AM Title: Tag Team
I'm surprised that ms Crowell was actually here at all to be honest :D
Author's Response:
Yea she was kind of just supposed to set up the premise that students can be shrunken down as a punishment. Didnt expect to really do much with her after that
[Report This]Date: February 07 2020 2:17 PM Title: Empty Threats
Ohh! I forgot only Ms. Crowell has the remote! Camilla was very convincing about shrinking Jack that even I believed her. Poor Jack had no idea.
Interesting to see Camilla simply hand over Michael. She seemed like she was handing Michael over to Kerri permanently. Is this true? If yes, then it looks like Camilla is going to find a new toy.
New toys, new people. Adam, the troublesome student still needs to be punished, haha. And then there is Jack who now lives in fear for the rest of his life. Kinda hot.
Then we get Ms. Crowell. I have been vouching for her return for a while now, so I’m glad to hear you will be having a nice arc with her soon. Ever since that first chapter where she sat on Adam, I would love to see her punish someone again.
As for particulars, well the ass is my second favorite spot, but my first is the pussy. Just my personal preference which I know is different from the rest of the story. I could see Ms. Crowell as this hot, naughty teacher that punished her students and gets horny from it.
I would love to see Ms. Crowell put someone (preferably a male student) down the front of her panties where she slowly lowers him down inside the dark abyss to scare him even further. Then she tells him that he will be her teachers pet or personal toy forever or something like that and then she releases her panties, sealing the student inside. Her tight panties force him against her wet vaginal lips giving him his first kiss which he never expected from those kinds of lips. Then she keeps him in there for the day, occasionally checking on him to hear his pleas before trapping him once again.
She could also tie him up to the front of her panties with little loops of thread that she can tie one loop to each of his wrists and ankles forcing him in apart in spread eagle position on her panties. She could then slowly bring the panties up her legs telling him there is no escape and such as he watches her pussy become larger as he gets pulled closer to it. Not necessary, but she could cross her legs periodically to further squeeze him between her legs.
I expect she will take some “lucky” student home with her so she can continue her fun 24/7. Also, I could see the tiny student making an escape attempt, but Ms. Crowell catches him and decides to punish him. She could wrap him up like a mummy but she leaves his head exposed. Then she tells him that she will punish him by keeping him inside her vagina for as long as she wants or something similar. He squirms in protest like a worm in her grip and she tells him to wiggle just like that inside her. She then inserts him inside headfirst and pushes him as far as her fingers can go entombing him insider her. She could then do some errands or maybe go to sleep with him sleeping inside her.
She could also do some butt stuff too, but I would love to see the horny side of Ms. Crowell and I hope you are able to include these suggestions. ;)
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay. Work got really busy, really quickly and I just could get the time needed to post. What I'll say about Camillia is that she is a teenage girl, and quite prone to extreme shifts in her demeanor. We're seeing a bit of that with her seemingly abandoning Michael to be left shrunken forever, and I plan to have these mood shifts become more exaggerated as the story goes on. She is certainly not the kind of giantess you want to find yourself trapped with.
I'm going to take a bit of a break from posting for a couple weeks, but I'll be back at it with consistent uploads, so keep an eye out and hopefully I'll be able to show you what youre looking for when I come back. Thanks for all the support thus far!
Date: February 06 2020 8:37 PM Title: Empty Threats
Little disppointed at Jack's escape, though would prefer his punishment to have been with Camilla rather than Kerri. Perhaps this is still a possibility, perhaps Jack will come back and bow before Camiila for just such a life? Heck, what boy wouldn't want to live between a girl's asscheeks?
Nice idea of Kerri wearing Mr. Lanning inside her tight leather shorts while she farts.
Love the Mr. Lanning torture, but it seems time to add another tiny, be it Adam or Jack or somebody else, especially since we have both Camilla and Kerri and Mrs. Cromwel as owners of tinies.
Are Camilla and Kerri simply sleeping in the same bed, or are they going to make love {good time for Jack to mistakenly sneak back in}?
Author's Response: Well Jack was never in any danger of being shrunken, since the size controlling remote is in Ms. Crowell’s possession. So Camilla just needed to make Jack think that he was going to be shrunken in order to dissuade him from running his mouth. And be patient, Michael’s arc is coming to a close soon at which point we will be focusing on a different character (either tiny or giantess.) Also, Kerri and Camilla are simply sleeping in the same bed. They’re simply best friends (Despite Kerri’s curiosity
Date: February 06 2020 4:41 AM Title: Rule Breaker
@DW,
I think you have mistaken Mrs. Lawrence for Ms. Crowell. I don’t think Kerri’s mom is the teacher, I think she is a different woman.
Author's Response: Correct, 10 points to Gryffindor
Date: February 05 2020 7:53 PM Title: The Oven
I missed commenting on the past few chapters, I only got around to reading them tonight. All I can say is you did an incredible job of keeping the psychological torment going.
Kerri being Mrs. Cromwel's daughter. Jack about to be shrunk {well possibly}. The chili induced farts. Camilla stating Mr. Lanning belongs in between her butt cheeks, and that Adam is HER'S.
Fantastic!
There is one, if not two elements missing though. Kerri's own tiny. Mrs. Cromwel's own tiny / tinies.
Will Kerri give up her own little brother to Camilla? Would Mrs. Cromwel give up her own son to Camilla?
Fantastic story, possible one of the best on this site.
Author's Response: Like Tom Speedy mentioned, Ms.Crowell and Kerri are not related. Kerri took Michael to what he assumed was Alyssa’s house but instead she took him to her own house to torment him some more. And for the time being Kerri is only going to be able to interact with the people that Camilla has shrunken. As far as Ms. Crowell goes, we’ll see her some more once Michael’s weekend is over.
Date: February 05 2020 6:48 PM Title: Rule Breaker
Hey, just started reading and am loving it so far! Just a simple question. How old is Camilla? Or is it meant to be ambiguous?
Author's Response: She is 18, however when she and Michael first started their affair she was only 17. So he’s got plenty of reason not to let people find out
[Report This]Date: February 05 2020 2:15 PM Title: The Oven
Jack. New character. One issue is that he is family. Would it be weird for Kerri to punish her own brother. I feel like Camilla would be perfect to toy with Jack since she is not related to either of them, but Camilla is already perfect with Michael.
Maybe they introduce Jack to Ms. Crowell and she can tutor him on sex education and pleasing women in general.
Otherwise, I don’t see Kerri taking him. Hmm, maybe Kerri’s mom. But I think it would have to be unaware so Kerri’s mom doesn’t freak out.
I prefer Ms. Crowell since I’m down for her to punish anyone at this time, and it would be interesting if she gets little Jack.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted to wait to respond to this one until after I had posted Chapter 19. I hope you liked the way the Camilla and Kerri dealt with a meddling Jack. My plan is to write this story one arc at a time. So right now I’m posting Michael’s arc, and when his weekend with Camilla is over I’ll focus on a different character for several chapters. So I’ll likely take a little break after I finish with Michael but when we do eventually get to Ms. Crowell, she will have a nice long string of chapters. Let me know if there’s anything in particular that you’re hoping to see from the giantess teacher.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2020 8:53 PM Title: The Oven
GOD!! Finally managed to catch up with your story... and you stay true to your synopsis. Camilla and even Kerri are two sociopaths. But I love the brief foot plays you put here and there and, as your last work, you remain very skillfull when it comes to torture envolving ass and fart descriptions. I envy you mate XDD
Now, an idea: maybe young Jack isn't a fool and before Camilla can shrink only him, he realizes what she means and jumps on her. In the end both end up shrunk somehow and at Kerri's mercy. Oh yeah, karma my friend. K A R M A kkkkkk
Another great work :)
Author's Response: Well hello there, I was wondering if I would hear from you on this story haha. Glad to see you’re reading and enjoying this far. And while Camilla can’t actually shrink people with just her phone, it’s an interesting idea to have Camilla get a taste of her own medicine. Could be fun :) Great to read your reviews again, hope you enjoy what’s coming next. The hanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2020 7:07 AM Title: Tag Team
I don’t mind the wait. Part of me is picturing Ms. Crowell punishing a student as we speak.
One thing that is new this chapter is Kerri’s mom. For some reason, I would love to see her get a chance with either Michael or another male student in her butt. I’m thinking Kerri got a big ass from her mom so imagine a hot woman with wide hips tormenting a little guy. Camilla could slip someone down her Kerri’s mom’s pants or something. It could be unaware, or maybe Kerri’s mom joins in on the fun and has her own toy.
Anyway, I love the statement that Camilla said that Michael belongs in the crack of her ass. That’s hot.
Also, I like how eager and horny Kerri is. Camilla seems more crafty, but Kerri’s eagerness seems to make things interesting.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!