Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2020 6:09 PM Title: Conditioning

"Conditioning" is certainly an appropriate title for this chapter.  Camilla is a master of both physical and mental domination.

Can't wait to read about both Mr. Lanning and Adam succumbing to Camilla's manipulations.

One quick thought, Camilla is obviously very intelligent to be Science Club president, so why doesn't she build her own shrinking remote while she has Miss Crowell's to copy?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yea Camilla is certainly developing into the sort of character that I’m hoping people will love to hate. In the coming chapters, we will see Camilla really get to stretch her legs as a giantess and flaunt her strength. I’m hoping that you’ll enjoy it. As for the remote, Camilla is intelligent but replicating a shrinking remote is too daunting a task for a single student. Additionally, with access to a remote, she doesn’t need to worry about creating one of her own. If Ms. Crowell were to take that access away however..... stay tuned :)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 9:09 PM Title: Welcome to Science Club

Fantastic story.  Who doesn't have a teacher they had a crush on, and wished to be used by in all sorts of ways like Miss Crowell?

You have a few typos.  If you reread your story you can easily see them.  That said they are nothing that takes away from your story in the least.

The overall premise is great.  I myself have been slowly wokring a story called "The Trilogy Of Teachers", basically the story of three seperate shrinking episodes all happening at the same school.

I really like how you followed up with teacher Micheal Manning and his intensions with Camilla.

One has to wonder about "a slight bit of movement form Kerri’s butt" {notice "form instead of "from", that's what I meant by a few typos}.  Is that movement another student being punished by the girls in Science Club?  Perhaps, just perhaps, it's a teacher being rewarded inside Kerri's jeans / butt since freshman year; a teacher who helped Kerri with her studies and is now being rewarded and happy in his / her new position.

Looking forward to Camilla being a total bitch, abusing Adam, and hopefully using that remote on Kyle.  By the way, you wrote "Did you just swear Kyle?.......but Mike just quietly apologizes", see the typos I mentioned?

Looking forward to finding out more about Camilla's toy, and perhaps Miss Crowell's toys as well.

You have a great story going on, please keep it going.

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed the story so far, and I appreciate you pointing out typos. I try to make sure I don’t get writing too quickly, but I will often spend up to a few hours on a chapter and it can become difficult to pick up on little things like that after I’ve been staring at the screen for so long. Like with the Kyle/Mike mistake, when I gave Mr. Lanning a first name, I had to go back and change the students name to Kyle. If you see errors, absolutely don’t be shy about pointing them out to me as it will only improve the experience for the next reader. Stay tuned for the next chapter, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 10:13 AM Title: Rule Breaker

This looks promising. Very, VERY promising.

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it. The road map for this one is still very unclear for me so fingers crossed that it turns out to the satisfaction of most!