Date: April 17 2008 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, this story is reaching Classic levels now! I love it, however, I think you are teasing us too much. Show us some sexual action plz. However, if you dont deem it necessary its ok, surprise us! Great Job.
Author's Response: There's some sex in an upcoming chapter, but that part of the GTS thing has always left me a little cold, because in these stories, it usually amounts to rape. So I tend to use it sparingly. I know it seems arbitrary to draw a line there, but I've never claimed this fetish made any sense ;-)
Date: February 22 2008 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Same, I'm hooked. I love this story. Just like homunculus; This story is AWESOME! Keep adding quickly. i hate the anticipation. :D
Author's Response: Glad you like it, TM! Thanks!
Date: February 08 2008 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please please finish this story. Its the best I have read in ages. Keep this pace, don't rush it, and insert more foot torture from Carolyn to the little couple.
Author's Response: Thanks, Dajo! At the rate I'm going, I don't think "rushing it" is going to be a problem ;-) But I know how it's going to end, and I'm pretty sure I know how I'm going to get there...
Date: February 07 2008 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I as well can't wait for the next one. Really good character description.
Author's Response: Well, the story is about as cliched as they come in this genre (mad scientist, cruel wife, shrinking ray), so I wanted to at least make the characters interesting. Thanks for reading, Fairway!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2008 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well done first chapter. Great references, pavlov pennicilin and the like. And excellent pacing. I always hate catching these first chapters cause I can't keep reading. Can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thanks, Galstaff! Hope you stick around til the end. God only knows *when* that will be ;-)