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Reviewer: Natch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2008 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Not giving a full review yet, but pointing out an error; at the very end, you didn't censor bitch, and I'm pretty sure that's an expletive. Also, in one of your other chapters, you forgot to censor another expletive. I guess it's time for a ctrl+f spree for fuck, bitch, shit, and cunt. With the appriate "ed", "s", and "ing" suffixes. 



Author's Response: Actually, the whole [EXPLETIVE DELETED] thing started off as a joke, but I realized I was pretty much stuck with it until the end of the story. But for sanity's sake, I tried to limit the censoring to actual R-rated words, otherwise the [EXPLETIVE DELETED] thing would be unreadable...

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