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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

amazing story

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

Always did like seeing your name pop up in the recent updates. Lengthy and interesting just like Homunculus. Not the happiest ending but well justified. I was hoping Chad would make it but I guess a party of three is one to many. :O

I can't wait to see your next work.



Author's Response: Me neither ;-)

Reviewer: Canaan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

Holy [EXPLETIVE DELETED] Hell, Cayce!

What a completely kickass ending! And to a completly mindblowing story!

That makes two for you, dude!

Now here's to holding one's breath for a third!

Bravo, Cayce!  Just pure-dee bravo!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I left the fate of Dave, Julie, and Carolyn a bit ambiguous because I've got another story in mind that will feature them, as well as a number of characters from HOMUNCULUS. It's tentatively titled WONDERLAND, but that may change by the time I get around to posting it.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 25

One nitpick, though: a true acronym is a word _formed_ by initials (example: U.N.E.S.C.O.) Anything else is just a plain initialism. And any phonetic pronounciation of same is neologistic slang (example: "lurp;" derived from L.R.R.P---Long Range Reconnaisance Patrol).

Author's Response: Oops! I guess Dave wasn't aware of that when he was narrating the story ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

Dave is right. It sounds like they crawled out of the frying pan and into a pile of still-smoldering ashes!

This was a great story, never-the-less. And, I thank you for sharing it with us. :-)

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