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Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2020 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really like where this story is heading.  Please continue!  Look forward to what's next.

Reviewer: Tinywulf Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2020 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

i think this is a really exciting one, blending elements  of an ordinary day with a nightmare coming.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought it was a great start. I hope to see more!

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