Date: August 07 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another wonderful story and must say, sad to see it end. Love this universe that you've created with the shrinking virus starting with Benefits of Immunity. Looking forward to your next story!
Date: August 07 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sad to see this story end. I loved reading it.
Date: June 12 2020 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is your best yet. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2020 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much. It's very well written with a great mix of Male and Female content from all sizes. I can tell you have a big penchant for feet both bare and with shoes on, hence your attention to detail in those scenes. Honestly, I don't have much hope for Ava and I'm kind of looking forward to when she's face to face with all the things she used to subject Scott to, all while hoping she somehow gets rescued eventually, if that makes sense.
Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2020 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have really been enjoying reading this story. Overall, i really like the Ava character the best. I like how she is such a flawed character. She has done some horrible things to scott and other people. However, she was liked to by her parents or led to believe something that wasn't true. She has had rumors made up about her. She was more just following what is considered a societal norm then truly doing anything bad to Scott which is interesting.
So to see her go down this path and explore how the other half lives is really interesting. I find it the most interesting chapters are the ones with her and seeing how this will unfold.
I do like the scott chapters as well. But I feel his character isn't in some ways as fleshed out as Ava even though he has had more time. He is a victim as he was diseased and shrunk. However, I feel like i don't know him as a person as well as Ava. There isn't as much to relate to with Scott.
Overall, I have been reading your story for a few weeks now and definately look forward to my lunch break on friday. As the new chapter always seems to be posted when i head to lunch. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to your future installments.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow the chapter with Grace using Ava is pretty much the kind of scenario I’ve been hoping for out of this story, really great job as always. Will either of Graces parents get to use Ava?
Date: March 28 2020 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
All your stories have always been an incredible gift to this community, but right now even more, as I eagerly wait for a new update every Friday.
This story just keeps on getting better and better. I love how you divided it in two, while continuing to make each branch as interesting as the other. Carmen is a fantastic character and her teasing is amazing. I love how she’s both kind and mean at the same time. Also, I can’t wait to see how Ava’s going to adapt to her new life. So many possibilities!
Keep it up, you’re doing God’s work in these trying times to keep us all busy :)
Date: March 27 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is your best yet! I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop with Carmen.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2020 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story! You're writing, world building, and descriptions are all phenomenal! I'm excited for the change in scenario now that Scott no longer belongs to a high school boy and is in the custody of a young woman.
Keep up the great work!
Date: March 06 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow another great story. Your stories have always been so good and you have another one here. You are one of my favorite Authors on the site. I love the emotional connections we have and details you got in the story. Like the feeling of the hoodie and sweat against her skin. You don't get that in most stories. Thank you for another great one. Looking forward to both arc's and hopefully this is a start to anothe great series. I was already a fan of your sorority series. Every time I see a Sorority chick on campus I imagine being shrunk and hers thanks to your stories lol. It's a good read. Keep them coming my friend.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonder if there's a possibility of Ethan shrinking and Ava having her way with him.
Date: February 08 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is fantastic! Glad to see another great story in the making from you - keep it up! :)
[Report This]Date: February 05 2020 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome starting chapter, great character dynamics so far.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
The first berg of 20!
You love to see it.
Date: January 31 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm in
I'm in
I'm so in I'm so ready for this story hell yes
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start! You do giants really well.
Curious what Ava is going to be like :)
Date: January 31 2020 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start! this story has a lot of places it can go. keep it going!