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Reviewer: Wizalex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2022 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: Confusion

Love stories written with the Lilli, Gulli, Brobbi system, really hope you come back to continue this one. Holly is definitely my favourite character, the perfect blend of casually superior and playfully destructive in my opinion. All the other characters are also very well written and defined.

Great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'm definitely continuing this, just needed some time off a bit as usual.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2022 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12: Confusion

Just read all 12 chapters. My favorite character is easily Carla. It’s so sexy to see someone in a position of power bend the rules to her will. 

I would love to see her sexually punish or tease a little human and maybe make him a teacher’s pet or something like that. Perhaps a human stress toy. 

I love the little glimpse we got of her handling her own city and it makes me wonder how she might handle a human. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I actually didn't expect that, happy that you liked it. Many thanks!

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