Date: May 08 2020 5:22 AM Title: A girl’s gotta eat
I like stories with fantasy races, so I read this one. Though the mention of 'vore' made me wonder if this is yet another story based within Karbo's fantasy world, but I'm pleased to find you have your own modern setting with some background as to why your giant mermaids are becoming voracious enough to consume humanoid creatures out of desperation. Hoping to read more set in this world~.
>>"His parent's TV was blaring with news report's of yet another mass shrinking from downstairs."
Is this a reference to a plot point that's going to be explained later, or a call-back to something else you've done or read? For whatever reason, the idea of Grant getting caught in a mass shrinking incidence and still mainintaing a relationship with Maris while the size of a literal shrimp that she needs to protect from the world (and herself?) is an amusing and erotic image I admittedly would like to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you seemed to enjoy reading this so far. As for wondering about that line from the story it's going to be expanded on with the 3rd chapter I just added.