Reviewer: DrTritium Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2020 3:10 AM Title: Her appetite isn’t for debate

I really like Maris as a giantess. I like the exploration of her as a cruel giantess, the scene with her playing with a boat was perfect, but also friendly to a few people. She has boundaries and won't compromise on what she is allowed to do. I also like the idea of some tiny characters starting to synpatheize with Maris and support her. It's a neat narrative that you have. 

Also, props for having mermaids with multiple stomachs. That's a fun plot device, especially since you take the time to write internal scenes. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I am glad you have liked it so far.