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Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

With Nick so tiny, does he go farther in the pussy, can he breathe inside now that there is more space for him, or does he go in somewhere else? Great story, I like the interaction and where the story is going.



Author's Response:

 He pretty much goes in the same place. As long as there’s room inside Cassie, there’s air, albeit stale air. However, he wasn’t exactly inside her for that long.

I try to strive for some degree of realism in my stories. Sure I take artistic license, especially with the resiliency of my main characters, but I really try to make things plausible and picturable in the minds of my readers.

Thanks for reading, and for the review!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

Awesome chapter.  Is nick gonna survive or was that splat meant to imply the end of him???



Author's Response:

Oh, the story’s not over yet. Nick’s troubles are just beginning.

Reviewer: GTSBill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

Awesome chapter! Definitely nice to see some butt action. I can't wait to see where you take things from here (that is, assuming the "splat" at the end of the chapter wasn't Nick getting flattened). He might be spending the night under there! I have to say I really enjoyed the imagery of Nick being super tiny and trapped in a puddle of cum while Cassie's butt looms above him. It'll be interesting to see how she reacts to how small he is now(if she thinks it was on purpose) and if he winds up even smaller. 

I personally really enjoy Cassie's character. Like I said in another review she reminds me a lot of my wife IRL who I could see being a lot like Cassie if I figured out how to do something like this, lol. 



Author's Response:

And the butt action doesn’t stop there; there’s LOTS more to come!

There’s just something about a tiny person swimming in a pool of cum while a giant woman squirts more down on him that I like. The feeling of helplessness from the tiny person’s perspective while watching a giant pussy discharge on top of him, all the while the woman has no idea what she’s doing to him.

 As far as how Cassie will react... well, She has to find him first.

I’m glad you’re liking the story; thank you for the review.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

Another very sexy chapter

Great work on the interaction and smutty scenes 

 

I find myself disliking Cassie over the past few chapters, I don't know if this is your intention or just my views on her character 

 



Author's Response:

Alright, give me some details: what exactly don’t you like about Cassie? Is it her personality, her features, or how she deals with Nick?

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