Date: October 01 2020 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
I have to with happy endings more often than cruel endings as my preferred choice of story. I do like how you mention the miscommunication between the two of them at their different sizes and how you try to keep it realistic. I would say that he would try to prove himself too her by shrinking again without her noticing and go through tough situation like the pussy, ass, or nipple to say that there is nothing wrong with him shrinking.
Author's Response:
Well, not to give away too much, but you’ll find Nick is going to have a hard time giving up his power. 😉
[Report This]Date: October 01 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
so glad there will be more and maybe fatal ass chapters. I have to say I love dark cruel ass plots more than anything, if the girl is totally unaware about it and makes it worse and worse. I just love ironic plots too, like she just looking into the mirror opening her arse crack with one hand and looking behind her back and sees nothing and then just let her hand go and the ass slams together and the micro particle boy just screams no wait im heere heeelp and then totally has a dumbfolded expression maybe when crack opens he thinks she heart him but she was just bending down picking up her underpants and he looks one last time into the mirror and sees her anus in the mirror with him the size of a lint or 100 times smaller... totally feeling lower than ever like a parasite. I also love scat plots and when it gets worse and worse over time, and him mybe even gets inserted into the anus or rectum, totally going trhough a hell plot and maybe dying in there.
Author's Response:
Well, it’s good to know where you stand as far as reading enjoyment. I think you’re going to like the next couple of chapters.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
really loved the first half of this chapter, but why did you ruin it with him getting out of her ass, it would have been such an amazing epic plot from there. I would wish he gets maybe lost in her ass again or in another story with a horrible ending, I am not a fan of happy endings to be honest.
Author's Response:
It’s true, I could have left Nick inside Cassie’s ass for a longer period, but he’d eventually have to come out some point, or end up dying in there, and I’m not ready to end the story there....at least, not yet. 😉 Rest assured, however, I’m an ass man, too, And I like the thought of a character being sat on, or stuck somewhere between a giant woman’s ass cheeks. If you liked the first part of this chapter, I think you’re really going to enjoy the next couple. Trust me, this won’t be the last Nick sees of Cassie’s ass!
I know some people like to have sad, or tragic endings at the end of their stories. For me, it all depends on the situation, and if I feel the story needs to have a happy ending or not. All I can say is, not all of my endings are going to be happy.
For now, thanks for reading, and for the feedback!
Date: September 28 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
I know she's worried and emotional and all
But part of me thinks nls Cassie's being a bit of a bitch
She seriously needs to let Nick explain his side of things instead of trapping him a jar like a fucking insect
Author's Response:
I agree that Cassie isn’t considering Nick’s side of things, but she’s more concerned with his safety than his feelings at the present moment. Like I’ve mentioned before, I didn’t want Cassie to be some unrealistic “perfect, bombshell wife”; I wanted her to be realistic, and to act and react like a real wife would if faced with a similar situation.
Also, with Nick at such a small size, Cassie can’t hear or understand what he’s saying, so she can only go off of his body language. If you recall, she DID notice Nick’s displeasure about being put in that jar, but she was too concerned with his safety, and too upset to find a better alternative.
I know Cassie’s personality maybrub you the wrong way at times, but it those qualities that make her seem realistic.
I appreciate your feedback, and I hope you continue to read on.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
Great chapter! So hot how Cassie put Nick in the glass jar! Love that kind of gentle domination/control.
Author's Response:
I was hoping some of my readers would enjoy the “glass jar” scene. I feel it brings a sense of realism to their situation as well. Cassie wants to keep Nick safe, so that might be an obvious choice. Besides, she threatened to do it before when he shrank himself too small in chapter five. It also won’t be the last time you see Cassie “punish” Nick for his recklessness either.
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
Great writing as always. Looking forward to reading the next chapter to see how things transpire.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!