Date: May 18 2021 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little Aftermath
Hey! As it has been some time, I wanted to check in to see if you were still planning to.update this with new chapters. Also hoping you're still making progress on the extra chapters for Babysitter Trouble. Great work!
Author's Response:
Hey there,
Yes, I know it’s been a bit, but I AM working on the last few chapters. I’ve just been busy lately and progress has been slow. I was hoping to have the next chapter posted sometime next week.
As far as Babysitter Trouble goes, the only work I’ve really been able to do on it is outline/scenario work; it’ll probably be more of the same until the rest of “With Great Power...” is completed. I’m still kicking around some ideas, but once my current story is done, I promise, it’ll be my primary focus.
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little Aftermath
Good chapter and good writing. I like how we are seeing how Nick is struggling with the relationship between Cassie and Jenny. it would be hard to change how one feels to someone you love for a long time for another person, it will take time. It will be intersting to see how Jenny tries to show Nick that she will love him the way he needs to be loved when small.
for a thought of why he shrinks uncontrollably, He associates women to shrinking. He train himself to shrink so he could fulfill his giant woman fantasy. once he obtained the ability to shrink and use it with his wife, it created a link in his mind to associate women with the need to shrink. Everything was good with his wife for awhile with the erotic shrinking relationship they had while doing it, creating positive reinforcement of the link in his mind to associate women, in certain situation, like lewd or erotic things, to shrink. With such a strong association in his mind about feeling good when small around women, it made it a habit that he shrinks when he sees, dreams, or thinks about women in a sexual way. He can prevent himself from shrinking in those situations if he is preoccupied with something else or emotionally not in the mood but can shrink if caught off guard. That is just my idea of why he can't control his shrinking.
Author's Response:
Yes, Nick certainly had a lot on his plate, and he’s finally coming to terms with how much his shrinking is affecting those around him.
You certainly provide some very good insights on why Nick tends to have his unwanted shrinking spells. When I chose to go this route, I’ve had to do a lot of research to find a commonality that I could use as an explication. I’ll have the results posted in the next chapter.
Thanks for the review and your support!