Reviewer: Beetlebomb Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2020 10:49 PM Title: Timothy is a Beta

I've followed your writing for quite some time, Joyce. I have to say this story in particular really hits home with me more than any others that you have written. 

 

The humiliation aspect is perfectly well executed. It's similar to Jeff Stintim's humiliation except you also introduce the women growing and, best of all, beautification. You have entered the realm of what many other giantess writers have touched upon, which is notion of the women becoming so incredibly attractive that they hinder the male protagonist in some way. Your comments about even their voices sounding sexier had resonated with me.

 

I check out your patreon page shortly after reading this and was disappointed to see no other stories resembled this humiliation + slow-growth gts + SM + beautification angle. I'm crossing my fingers that you plan on working on either a sequel to this or a future story in this genre.

 

Regardless, as a long time reader and writer, this is easily in my top 5 stories of all times. Thank you for sharing this amazing work.

 

If I may, I highly recommend you read "Cradle in the South" by Moose on giantess city. His story is similar to this and contains many nuances that I believe you would appreciate! 

Reviewer: miniscule Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 6:57 AM Title: Timothy is a Beta

Really hot and original perfect dialogue. Beatrice is da bomb.

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks so much!  Glad you like her <3 

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2020 4:58 AM Title: Timothy is a Beta

Loving it so far ! The build up is great, can't wait to see what's next !

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Max!  I'll be posting more soon! <3 

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2020 5:53 PM Title: Timothy is a Beta

I think this is great! Really excited to see what halppens next!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much zbh!  Glad you're enjoying it! Lots more to come <3 <3