[Report This]Date: April 24 2020 2:36 AM Title: Day 9: Lost In Berlin
Matthew's self pity at the end was a nice touch. He's 18, lost in a foreign country, and in the hot and cramped intestines of a sexy slightly older young woman who unkowningly ate him with food. To make things worse nobody knows where he is, not even the female stranger who "abducted" him by swallowing him.
Blast From The Past had the scenario where the main character was swallowed by an unaware girl who got indigestion and defecated him out outdoors in the town park where he was able to get the attention of a friend. But he's so far away from anyone he knows, in a foreign country, and inside an unaware female stranger that he's going to have to get her attention when she poops him out, without getting flushed away. His journey's through Emily and Sarah were relatively clean, but with the huge amount of food and drink that Jessica ate and drank he's for sure going to come into contact with a lot of girl poop and pee when she lets him out by relieving herself. He'll probably be encased into a log. If he's lucky she'll clog the weak european toilet, forcing her to look down and notice him. Or maybe she's the tomboyish type of girl who looks down to admire her work and notices him that way. Since she's unaware she swallowed a minature man, her reaction to finding a minature toy in her poop, then seeing it moving and alive is going to be such a shock to her. I look forward to her suprise and interactions between him and Jessica. After she gets over the shock of finding a tiny young American, in her poop of all places, his invulnerability to suffocation and digestion, and the improbability of it all her interactions with him are going to be interesting. She seems to be a bit of a tomboy, unladylike eating, drinking, and burping and after such an intimiate view of her own body feel she has nothing left to hide from him. I can see her playing the role of the slightly older more experienced and assertive big sister type to the naive young American and guiding him on the female body.
Author's Response: You've got it exactly right, I might let her figure out who he is, but I'll decide that tomorrow. I wanted to pull on the heart strings with that ending, so that's why I added it. I plan on having him travel through the sewers in the next chapter, but who knows, we might get some more interaction with Matthew and Jessica. His trip in Europe is almost coming to a end, so we'll see what happens next.