[Report This]Date: May 26 2020 4:52 PM Title: Introduction
Oof....well...that was uncomfortable
I am really hoping he can fix his relationship with his sister and they become great friends and well have a great happy ending with everyone treating him nicely and him and claire becoming a very close couple and maybe when they have their date things get naughty in the bedroom and they both have a great time
Keep up the great work mate!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2020 7:54 PM Title: Introduction
Would you mind naming the chapters? Makes it easier to keep track and go back to things.
Author's Response:
I will try my best, but wow do I have a hard time trying to figure out names for the chapters in this story lol but I will see what I can do.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2020 2:55 PM Title: Introduction
Very intresting premise I like it
Kris is actually pretty sweet
And i hope our little Protagonist ends up with mandy at the end or maybe something will happen that claire saves him and he falls for her? Be very cute either way they both seem like awesome girls! As long as we get a good ending and a cute couple for our boy and one of these Beautiful girls!
Lots of shenanigans coming our way but I just hope we have a good sweet ending.
Author's Response:
I liked your idea, and i hope you enjoy the next chapter when it gets uploaded. Thanks for being a reader!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2020 9:29 PM Title: Introduction
Love where this is going... Maybe in one of the chapters the sis will stich him to her shirt and forget about him. I am really enjoying the fact that she is so ditzy.
Date: May 20 2020 7:27 PM Title: Introduction
I always love these types of stories, so I'm very interested to see where this goes! I'd love to see some unaware things happen with our shrunken protagonist, and I hope to read an update soon. :)
[Report This]Date: May 20 2020 4:58 PM Title: Introduction
I like the concept a lot. A indestructible brother and a ditzy giant sister, so much potential. I look forward to the next chapters. As for a suggestion how about Chris getting stuck to his sister's thong for awhile?
[Report This]Date: May 20 2020 4:10 PM Title: Introduction
It's very interesting. I always enjoy the concept of being flattened and getting stuck to girls' bodies. Just be a little more careful with some spelling mistakes and you will rock it.