Reviews For Down by the river
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Reviewer: Acrophite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2023 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was such a good read. It captures a vital part of the giant and tiny dynamic. The utter power differences and the control the giant has. Sarah is just so manipulative and he's so broken, and without any action at all you can just feel the imbalance of power here. It's so well written and just...sad to see him give in and truly believe this is what he wants. Great job!

Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2022 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was unsettling. Really captures the essence of a broken man better than most stories I've read.

Reviewer: Undersquid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2020 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story, and Sarah is a woman after my own heart. I like their conversation, and the slow changes and realizations. In particular, I'm quite fond of the acceptance "sweetie" finally found, and his vast intelligence, manifest in the way he adapted and returned to the place where he belongs. Please continue writing!

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2020 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like the whole theme of freedom and slavery, represented as the duality between the man hidden in the unspoilt nature and the domestic man. In the end he chooses his own slavery beacause he can't resist the temptations of an easier life and of sex.

You were able to make this deep without any actual porn content, the only criticism I would feel to make is that this was too short :( but this was worth reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I didn't really know what I wanted to write when I started out and didn't think that it would be very enjoyable to read so I very happy you liked it

Reviewer: atherfeet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was an incredible story! A beautiful trip into a shrunken person’s psyche. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I wasn't sure where it was going to go but as I wrote it it became less action-focused and more to do with how he adapted to his new life. Glad you enoyed it

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's creepy. Unnerving, like, prime Stockholm-Syndrome stuff.

 

I like it.



Author's Response:

It's a little weird but it was enjoyable to write. Thanks so much for the review and glad to hear you liked it

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