Whenever I read some of your stories, I make up continuations in my head where the suffering characters involved escape and find salvation in the care of a gentle giantess. Partly because I enjoy stories of abused and traumatized tinies getting saved and healed, but also due to the intensity of the violence. The way you express the psychological torture and trauma is inspiring.

I'm not a fan of dumb and too unhygienic dominants though - I experienced both mothers as grown up toddlers. I like the cunning sort more. They can be disgusting and the like as long as it is not a part of their persona.  

I found a lot of parts hard to read, which is most likely due to the fact that I am not native English. Nonetheless, this created the thought that the language you use here is a bit over the top and comical. 

I enjoyed the vivid descriptions and fitting analogies and try to come back for inspiration on how to write certain parts in the English language. 

I liked these four chapters very much. I like how you describe the scene and emotions.
The part 1 was absolutely great so I am really looking forward to the part 2.

Author's Response:

Thanks; if you liked part 1, there's much more of it here, to new extremes.

This is great! I loved the part 1 of this series and now that you are making a part 2 I can't wait to see what happens next!