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Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2020 9:10 PM Title: Unaware Torture: Track Girl

What do you mean torture? Not a single thing about this chapter is a torture! I say that this is heaven.

I really thought that this was a remake and they were the siblings. I might have love this even more. No matter

I really love how you describe on how disgusting the girl's foot is especially her foot odor and sweat. I always love it when your tinies hate it so much that I envy them

I hope some of the 30-minute stories' chapters get some sequel. Would love to read the sequel of this. A smelly shoe ride would be nice @////@

This really is our ultimate dream (one of my ultimate dreams for me though)

Thanks again for another awesome story and for that shoutout. Keep up the quality of your stories always

Author's Response:

The characters are ambiguous so if you want to imagine them as Hito and Akari from Track Team's Good Luck Charm you're more than free to :D


I'm glad you liked it so much, and yeah this is my dream too~

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Date: June 14 2020 6:05 PM Title: A Deal with a Demon (Part 1)

Woooops! I forgot to rate this one

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2020 1:21 AM Title: A Deal with a Demon (Part 1)

Wow! This is new. I loved that you returned to writing darker stories compared to HIH:A. Anyways, I really love Clara's roomate's cruelty even if it's just described in a single paragraph (that there is a great writing skills).

Somhow, I would love to be on Clara's shoes and never take revenge instead and enjoy the torture. Haha. 

I can't wait see more of this soon and I hope there would be some F/m and FF/m on future chapters also.

As always, thanks again for another excellent story


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