Date: June 19 2020 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a great chapter, i really loved it!
The grandmother is a great new character and with her, there are so many new possibilities!
I loved it, that the mother forced him to massage the feet of the grandmother and that the three are not just gentle with him. i loved, that he referred them as goddesses.
Please continue this great story!
When you want, i have a few new ideas:
The women should interact more with John. In this chapter they ignored him most of the time and were a bit unaware. I would find it better, when they talked more with him, force him to do more things or play with him.
They should be more dominating. Perhaps, when they say "climb my feet and massage my toes" and he dont want to do it, they could be like "i dont care what you want, i make the rules and you do it, i am the big one".
- the grandmother could force him to sleep in her socks, between her toes, at night. Like: "im so exhausted, you will sleep in my socks tonight and massage my toes until im asleep!"
- the grandmother should put little john in her bra, because she likes how he struggels in there. please Please, do something with John and her big breasts.
- the three woman could make a "dare/bet night" with john. Like: The mother could bet, that John couldnt fight the Tongue of the sister for 10 seconds or the grandmother could bet, that john cant jump over the cleavage of his mother from one breast to the other or the sister could bet, that john couldnt climb his grandmothers breasts in under one minute or the sister could bet, that john wouldnt get his grandmother to lactate, when he licks her nipple. They could use him as a play thing and it could be great humiliaiting things. When you want, they could drink more alcohol, so that they come to these ideas :D. There are many possibillities :))
The most important thing (for me): Let them be more dominating/cruel/playful. John could do nothing against them, they are like goddesses to him. They can do whatever they want and should force him to more things like a good slave/pet. Please let them huimiliate him more.
I really really loved your chapter. Please make more with the grandmother and please let her use her giants breasts. it would be so great, if you could use my ideas.
I send you coffees for your effort :))
Author's Response:
Thanks for the coffees, Ill start writing the next chapter to have grandma play a main role