Date: July 13 2020 12:42 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
I gotta say, as a fellow new writer with a first story, this is impressive! I'm loving the world building, the characters. I'm guessing there's some deeper story to this behind the whole super human race they are building. Seems like they want to secretly weaponize the kids.
Surprised to see liz being mean to her brother with the new height she's gained. Also surprised to see Julia wanting you steal and potentially break Brent and Haley's relationship... she seemed so sweet and gentle before.
I was worried the way the story was heading, I thought it was being set up so that as Brent shrinks, Haley loses interest in him allowing Julia to be the one that truly cares but it's nice to see that isn't the case. Haley seems to be supportive to Brent forever!
I look forward to reading more of this story! Keep it up man! :)
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 2:27 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Nice chapter! Haley is truly a loving girl, hope the best for the couple, even if there's Julia who is looking for him.
I was suprised by Liz sudden dominance over her brother, but I liked that the other giantess stop her and say that she must respect him, to not let the power go over her head. Nice!!
I liked also the sex scene, the couple speking like a baby was fun to read.
A final note to Mitchell.. his plan backfired, kinda.
Can't wait for next part!!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:01 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Glad to see another update! I know from experience how annoying It is to write and post from a phone, but this chapter was really great. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:01 AM Title: 9: The Anticipatied and the Surprises
Glad to see another update! I know from experience how annoying It is to write and post from a phone, but this chapter was really great. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!