Reviews For Into The Wild
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Your writing is very generally descriptive. I wonder what Noeleen is going to tell him.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2008 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Not bad! But, you didn't explain the reason for his near-scream at the end of the previous chapter. Did Noeleen almost swallow him along with the water she swigged?

Author's Response: Hi CC, catching up with the reviews... Well the shout is of frustration, he was trying to get to a drink of water after the ordeal, and she just snatched it away from him! Nothing dramatic! ;-)

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