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Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this!!! Do you take commisions?  



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this story! As of right now, I do not take commisions. I am, however, very flattered you asked! It's something I might reevaluate after I release another story though. I'd probably post about it on my deviantart were it to change.

Reviewer: Kyrios Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is easily one of the best stories with a vore focus I've read here in awhile. The pred sounds attractive but in a realistic way and she displays a cute sense of gluttony. I enjoy the endo bits and the horror of being in a stomach's environment. The burps and how it impacts the poor trapped souls are incredibly hot. The vomit scene isn't really my thing but the sheer terror of it is endlessly arousing. 

I know it was just a one shot but I really wouldn't mind if you wrote something with this character again. 



Author's Response:

Hello Kyrio. Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'm really happy that, despite not enjoying the vomit-stuff in-and-of-itself, you managed to find appeal somehow. I was worried that bit would scare people away, and I did my best to warn readers when it was coming.

 

I'm glad you seemed to enjoy the story. I always like to hear what people like/dislike and all that. As for writing something with the Zhen character again... we'll see what the future holds! I made her up just for this story, and I haven't done a sequel to any of my existing stories yet. She'd probably be tricky to write something new for, given her backstory here.

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