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Reviewer: Ess-rets Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2020 4:19 PM Title: Prologue — The cherry petals have the same color of her hair.

Your style and your story is very different from what we can find there. And I really like it! I hope you will continue this story. Also, the fact that your girlfriend is  notre only a giantess of some sort, but rather like a God feel so good ! 



Author's Response:

Obviously I'll continue it! And yeah, I like the feeling of all the "godess" (literally) thing. 

Reviewer: jellytea819 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2020 10:21 PM Title: Prologue — The cherry petals have the same color of her hair.

I definitely do see the light novel style coming from this. The way you write the dialogue makes it easy to tell who is talking and makes it quick and easy to read through (light!). The description of scenes and narration work well too. Good job on being able to do so well with telling the story without English expertise as you mentioned. Don't sell yourself short on your English ability. This is a solid translation.



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much! I'm relieved that in the end I did a good work translating, I was a bit unsure about my skills but reading you I felt a bit more confident!

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