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Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2020 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 — The rose that raised with cotton thorns.

This story would be easier to read if you inserted a space between paragraphs. Maybe you did this originally and giantessworld negated it by clumping everything together. If that's the case, there's a way around it by editing the story and then inserting the original with the spaced paragraphs.



Author's Response:

Oh, sorry about that! But the truth is that when I visualize a chapter I see spaces between paragraphs. I think it's due to the different aspect configurations from the page, I had another aspect before and it looked like what you say, without the spaces, anyway, thanks for your advertise! 

PD: I use the one with the image at the top left. 

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2020 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 — The rose that raised with cotton thorns.

Great chapter. I like how she can play around at such huge scales but not leave a lasting impact. Hope she keeps up the fun scenarios!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! Yeah, definitely she'll keep doing them, fun and lewd scenarios soon too! 

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