[Report This]Date: February 16 2021 1:24 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Wow, that is really Nice of you. Can't wait to see this next story then! Hope the daughter has more or less the same personality and relation with her dad as this version tho. But that is great news, thanks in advance! Looking forward to see the conclusion for this one too. Your stories are one of the best on this site imo.
Cheers
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the kind words! and yes she will be mostly the same... a bit more daring and mischievous i guess but i definitely want her to keep her like giddy joyful attitude about things and ultimately want the best for her dad. she might have some small "outbursts" but she'll never be fully cruel
[Report This]Date: February 12 2021 11:37 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Been away for a while but oh boy, what a Nice surprise to see these wonderful new chapters!
And if I may ask/sugest, it would be really nice if he continues to slowly shrink. It would be a great parallel with him becoming more and more submisse to his daughter. The smaller he gets, the more he gets to obey his daughter and try to please her. Specially if they fight again, would love to see this again when he is smaller!
If this is kind of the path you're going, one cool scene I think is to make the dad do his daughters nails. Imagine him at the size of her feet doing this for her! yummi! And would add to the submission part too!
With my wishfull thinking out of the way, I really loved the dream sequence where Jessie is a giant angel/goddess. Usually I don't like DS very much, but this one was on point for me! Really well done!
Great writting as always friend! Anxious to see next chapters : )
Author's Response:
ive got the story mapped out for a good while ahead so unfortunately there wont be any active shrinking, but this version of the story is almost up and then i'll be starting up the second, where he'll be a little under a foot tall. so people will get their different size preferences, itll just be differently than normal. but thanks for reading and the review! :)
Date: February 06 2021 4:17 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love how she handled him in the newest chapter....forcinh him to smell her foot sweat will certainly start to make him realize she is in control :)
Author's Response:
glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Date: December 22 2020 7:42 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Continues to be awesome....would love to see a total transfer of power....perhaps more size reduction, foot worship, or other servitude to her. Great job so far, can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
thank you for the kind words! my other story generally has more foot worship stuff atm but there will be some upcoming in a few chapters, and he's always getting a little more more servitude-y to her every day ;)
Date: December 20 2020 3:40 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
So happy that you are continuing to update this regualrly! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping he may shrink more, or be subjected to her feet, since he seems to NOT want that :)
Author's Response:
im happy that im updating it regularly too :)
Date: December 16 2020 5:10 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Great chapter, I would loved to have seen her catch him in the laundry basket and I hope that is some foreshadowing lol. Would have missed that great conversation at the table though if he was still stuck in the basket. Can't wait to see how the night goes.
Author's Response:
glad you liked it!
Date: December 10 2020 3:25 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Definitely my favorite chapter so far. Loved twister. Would not be disappointed to see a rematch hahaha. Last couple foot massages had her with socks on, would personally like to see this with the socks off, maybe because Jessie complains she can't feel it as much with socks. Love the description of the shorts my absolutely favorite, Im always buying my wife cheeky shorts sexier than a thong to me any day of the week.
Author's Response:
yeah her socks are comin off eventually lol dw, also got one of your suggestions coming in next chapter
Date: December 07 2020 12:11 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Hahaha, I guess what I mean by action is more physical content between them. When she hugged him and lifted him off the ground, I think that was the first time. Would love to see a bit more of that kind of stuff is all. Lol
Author's Response:
oh yeah dw its definitely coming
Date: December 04 2020 4:39 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Just perfect....wonder if some one will get a spanking hehehe !
Please write more soon this is the best story on the site !
Author's Response:
you're preeeeetty close :O new chapter tomorrow
Date: October 15 2020 2:16 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
That was probably my favorite chapter. The hug as great, would love to read it from her perspective. Cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
yeah I know I don't show other character's thoughts other than Marcus but I'll sometimes describe what they're thinking so I sorta feel like I can get multiple perspectives that way
Date: October 04 2020 9:54 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Hi! Well done so far.
Some extra scenes you could include could be ones where the daughter unintentionally dominates her father or isn't aware he is in the same room due to his size.
For example he could be lying on the couch but she doesnt see him over the armrest, she casually throws her wet school socks onto his face and continues to the kitchen.
Her father might be trying to help her clean her room and she comes home after school while he is in there, clearing below her bed. He feels guilty and hides thinking she'll go have a shower but her bare soles dangle and scrunch centimetres from his face while she browses her phone
Author's Response:
thank you!
i checked out your story too - 72 REVIEWS i wish i had that many lol but thank you for leaving one yourself
i can tell you like unaware stuff lol but those are great ideas actually and not too extreme that i might be able to add the first one! as for the second, i was actually already planning for him to be stuck under her bed when she comes home with her boyfriend and starts making out with him, which isnt like, super the same but close enough where idk if i'll have both but maybe i will tho but we'll see. can definitely fit the first one in though, thanks for the ideas!
Date: September 26 2020 9:26 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love this, thank you for another great chapter? Curious to see how this develops - is she going to become more dominant over her Dad, more rebellious?
On another note, are you still in school or do you teach?
Author's Response:
definitely more dominant but still kinda slow with time. idk if i'll make her rebellious tho, i kinda like their relationship. i wanna make him instigate it more than her.
and no im not a teacher lol. my writing would probably be better and i wouldnt need to use an online thesaurus every 2 minutes and i'd DEFINITELY proofread what i write lmao
[Report This]Date: August 21 2020 2:34 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Omg, simply loved the start. Loved the slow burn you seen to be going for. Though their relationship will chance, I hope she will stay kinda gentle with him. Not my thing when the bigger character goes sexually insane and start acting with violence out of the nowhere! Hope you keep exploring their relationship in interesting ways like you did here. Also, can we expect some foot interaction down the path?
Of course, anyway you go Ill keep reading it! Thanks for this and another incredible stories, friend! 🥰💙
Author's Response:
Yes! That's exactly how I feel about a lot of stories too, I like stories that are a lot softer (idk how else to describe it), like they're not completely gentle and G-rated, but they're not psycopathic from day 1. There's gonna be foot interaction a few chapters down the line but imo there's a lot more foot focus in my other story
Date: August 19 2020 1:10 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I like the mention of Marcus's mom being around. Leaves options for the occasional interactions with her as dwindles down, even for a whole spin off down the line if Marcus were to change hands.
Author's Response:
lol yep that is 100% why i included it. she'll be popping by later on
Date: August 10 2020 9:38 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Oh I agree, I wasn't suggesting that she only wear thongs and I doubt the girl who said that to me really does. I just liked the visual I got from the statement it was funny but also suggestive. Regarding your story I pictured him struggling to fold regular sized underwear and the daughter laughing and maybe suggesting thongs might be more manageable for him. Or him coming across a thong and being embarrassed and or disgusted and her joking saying her ass swallows everything up anyway, maybe followed by a so he better look out lol.
Author's Response:
yeah stuff to keep in mind. i like the humiliating dialogue aspects to my stories so i might do that at least. guess ill see what happens
Date: August 10 2020 1:50 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I like the Laundry Ideas. Would work on several levels the embarrassment of collecting the her dirty laundry such as underwear then maybe struggling to fold things as his daughter would like especially as he gets smaller. On the thongs I remember a friend of mine telling me she has to wear thongs because her ass swallows everything. Turned me on to know end. Would be fun tonsee dads reaction to such a statement. Im sure she will think of other fun ways to give her dad purpose and for him to earn his keep.
Author's Response:
lol im aware that some girls only wear thong sized, but thats not the experience of most girls, even thicker ones. not sure if i'd incorporate that aspect but i'll keep it in mind, thanks for reviewing :)
Date: August 03 2020 7:05 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I hope she has sexy sized breasts that they both start noticing r growing ....great start ...love the sizes
Author's Response:
i hope so too havent thought that far ahead lol
Date: August 03 2020 2:21 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Great start. Is he going to get smaller. I'd love to see him get to the 5 to 7 inch mark. Hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
yeah but thats waaaayy down the line. after around 20 chapters he'll be 8 inches and then eventually down to 1
Date: August 03 2020 1:12 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I really like the concept and the start of the story you have here! Honestly not sure which story I'm more excited to see get more updates (this one or the sister/brother one haha!) Can't wait to see more from both :) If it won't give too much away I would be curious to know if this one will have a bit more femdom involved than your other story?
Author's Response:
thats the goal yeah
[Report This]Date: August 02 2020 1:26 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Great start
Author's Response:
thank you :)