[Report This]Date: August 15 2020 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 Homeroom
Whoa! You are fast! I was expecting this soon, but not today. Haha! But I always enjoy seeing these updates so I appreciate each upload. I'm just amazed at how your brain can come up with stories just like this. I mean, this is incredible. I just love these kinds of stories.
I kinda like how you explained all the species of aliens again. At the end of the other story, I kinda just went by their names and forgot who each kind of alien is.
Hmm, 3 girls, 1 guy and 1 sexy teacher. That means a lot of attention will be on Tom, and I am already enjoying this. Looks like Tom will have some experience with each person, but I have no idea what each person wants. (Except maybe one person. Lol.)
I really like what you did with Ms. Eve's character. While I'm used to her being controlling, I see how you mentioned that the school promised her she could play with Tom, whereas later on, she usually makes that decision himself. So basically this is just stage one of rise to dominance. I can't wait to see her become powerful!
I also like how the main character's name is Tom which makes it easier to put myself in his shoes. Thank you. :)
Ah. Sleeping arrangements. I wonder if Ms. Eve is part of the drawing. If she wins, then I'm not sure if the other girls would have a chance later on. We know how possessive Ms. Eve is. Hmm. As much as I want Ms. Eve to have Tom by herself all year, the story could get repetitive, so I'm guessing these other girls will add some variety to the mix.
Im going to guess Sally gets him first. She is bigger than Tom, but I think the other girls might be more challenging for Tom to deal with. Samantha with her magic has the potential to do anything with him, and Erica looks like she just wants to fuck him. Lol.
Since this story is a prequel, I'm not 100% sure what Ms. Eve would do to Tom if she had him. In the future, she would use him as a sex toy, but here, she might toy with him in other ways and slowly become more sadistic over time. That's my guess. Unless, she already has these naughty ideas in her head and has been waiting a while to try them on a human. Whatever the case may be, I'm exited to find out.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and the review!
I wanted to do your story first, since the original diverted to less Ms Eve themes later on. Plus I am still organizing the other spin-off and had ideas ready to go for this, thanks to your excellent suggestions. The single person story was actually something I took from your suggestion!
Ms Eve in this is the up and coming teacher, so she will get away with alot of things, this is why she was so powerful in the original story. I will also focus on not only her dominance of Tom but the other teachers also, but Tom is always the main focus.
I never had a draft that did not have a 'Tom' character and it was always going to be the main character regardless, its just now, its the only main character, twice the torment!
I will add this, Ms Eve is being floaty with Tom and will be for at least 2-3 chapters, however once she notices students abusing him (as teased in the latest chapter), she will force herself to interact with him. Tom's main 'partner' is Ms Eve in this. The other students are their to allow her to do what she does and make situations to force events. Magic being a new one that will help Ms Eve in the future. However, yes, to avoid repeating events, Ms Eve will share him with others, but Ms Eve is the focus (as per the title)
I am surprised you guessed that, but yes. The easiest character to 'accidently' use Tom, which will lead to lust for him and the other girls to try taking advantage of him.
Samantha will have ALOT of fun with Tom, including her and Ms Eve scenarios (Magic makes everything fun!)
Ms Eve will learn alot about Humans in this story, her character in the original is due to events in this story.
Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!