[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 Night Pleasures
I love this chapter!
The shock mechanism was a nice twist since it basically forced Tom to please her all night. I love how she playfully stated that she forgot to turn it off. We know she purposely kept that on.
Having Samantha show up was another cool surprise. I kinda forgot who she was so I had to go back and get a recap, but now I remember. With her abilities, anything is possible for her. She could literally enlarge his tongue while he is trapped there.
Also, I wonder how will Samantha know when Ms. Eve returns. Maybe she will return at lunch? I'm not sure. Tom might be getting a bit thirsty by that time. Haha. Unless Samantha fills that role.
You know, I didn't think much of reading your "super stories" story, but after that one review about "the boys" was mentioned, my mind went "whoa, now you got my attention". So it might be some time before I read all 20+ of those chapters, but you can bet a review will be there soon.
But I'm pretty sure I'm still picking this story as my favorite. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Glad the extra time helped in the end.
And yes, I wanted to make sure he kept serving, without Ms Eve cutting things short. The answer was a simple device to punish him while she slept.
And I have plans for Samantha, she will never overtake Ms Eve, her name is in the title for a reason, its her story. But I find Samantha like a mini Eve on drugs. A being of extrodinary power who's only goal is to mess or use Tom. Plus her powers make her fun to write.
A surprise for the next chapter.
And I hope you check it out. Its got alot of themes my other stories but in a new Super Hero setting. I look forward to your review!
And I expected as much, and I plan to continue it and have a new chapter up soon!
Thanks again for your continued reading and reviews and I look forward to the next review.