[Report This]Date: March 11 2022 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming
A very interesting story so far. A bit long winded at the end, but still very good.
I just hope that we don't have to wait very long for a performance
[Report This]Date: January 10 2022 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming
I found the story very intresstring and promissing at the beginning but i think you introduced additional charackters to fast to the pool of interaction. And before Leo could the first time interact with Vela´s bottom wich was implied by both several times, she leaves and suddenly its all about sleeping in a snakebelly. At the momet i am not as curious how it continuies as i was at the first chapters as there where only Leo and Vela. But perhaps you´ll make it in the end or not *shrugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback! I’m glad I had your good favor for at least a portion of this story, even if I end up sort of losing you later. The story won’t linger on the nagas much longer, though I’ll admit I’ve been hung up on them a while. If you were looking for some “butt” stuff, might I direct your attention to a little ways through chapter 10, “detour,” or is that not quite what you had in mind? Lol.
In any case. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Maybe I’ll recapture your love with later chapters.
Date: December 01 2021 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming
Just read it all in one sitting. LOVED it! Not so much into vore but it was very well written :).
Author's Response:
I quite love getting reviews like that. I guess it’s lucky that, though this is definitely a vore story, smut only accounts for a little less than half the chapters, and vore isn’t the only box I check in them. Lol. I thank you dearly for the compliment to my writing. I’m just here to have fun and share what’s in my head!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2021 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming
Keep coming back to this. Hope there’s more eventually :)
Author's Response:
There will be, I promise! My brain wasn’t up to writing for a while, so I’ve been just letting my hands do art instead of focusing on narratives. But I’m feeling the itch begin to return…
Date: August 13 2021 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming
WOW! I really like this chapter. I am very curious what will happen next.
I missed your writing a lot.
Hehe, I guess I'm addicted to this story. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, Bartek. As always, I appreciate your enthusiastic feedback both her and on other platforms. <3