[Report This]Date: February 26 2024 3:59 PM Title: The Beginning
Welcome back to writer of passage I was wondering what happened to you again, anyway thank for the lovely chapter still wondering from a previous chapter long ago if the shrink girl forgot her name who got infected with Annabelle blood going to make a appearance and show up, I could see the infection blood make a shrinke have some benefits like obedience and complete loyal to the one they got infected by as well as improve resilience and durability similar to a type 0 but lesser being a type 2 aka a type 0 b for short that just My theory, anyway also has to ask why isn't Annabelle twin sister a type 0 as well seeing as they both are identical twins it just seems odd to me since they both are identical twins and should have the same blood type?
Date: February 15 2024 5:42 AM Title: The Beginning
Just checking up on you, again you haven't posted a new chapter in five months, want to see you doing All right anyways Hopefully your account wasn't hacked as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks Nightwatch,
I'm all right, just super busy. I'll try to be more communicative in the future, sorry for going all MIA! I'm actually planning on uploading a new chapter today if everything goes well. (fingers crossed)
It means a lot that you guys are still looking forward to this series :)
Date: January 14 2024 1:55 AM Title: The Beginning
Nem sei por onde começar... sua história é incrível! simplesmente um dos melhores do site! Conheci ela depois de alguns capítulos já terem sido publicados e pude ver sua evolução com fluidez!
Eu realmente espero ver o resultado desta magnífica história. Não consigo imaginar qual das muitas possibilidades acontecerá com Annabelle, mas se posso expressar minhas opiniões; Eu realmente acredito que depois de tudo que ela passou, seria oportuno superar isso.
I mean, among the things that I think contributed to a good outcome is the fact that she should maintain her humanity and perhaps escape her captors. Punishing them is not a requirement, but if it happens it works... finally, although it is already defined, I think it would have been logical for Annabelle's sister to also be type 0, since they were twins... in any case , please don't abandon the story!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2023 6:22 PM Title: The Beginning
I can't help myself, though, your writing style reminds me a lot of kenny224. Even to such an extent, that I'm inclined to believe it's you, lol. If I could pick one correlation, it would be this "submit to your goddess" voice inside a head of the main protagonist.
You're an extremely talented writer in this genre. I'm absolutely loving this story, and I can't wait to see how it progresses and of course, its end.
I'm also impatiently awaiting this long time coming encounter of Belle with Zoey. I do hope there's gonna be several chapters dedicated to this alone, as I can imagine with Zoey finding a shrunken "sister", especially in her indestructible stature, is her dream come true.
Should you be able to come up with your own patron or whatever account to post some of your other stories, I'll be the first in line.
Wish you all the best!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2023 10:56 PM Title: The Beginning
Miss you! Hope all well WoP :)
Date: September 07 2023 5:17 PM Title: The Beginning
Love this story, especially the scenes where the four are comforting Annabelle.
Honestly, I'm hoping Annabelle can actually get back to her best friend, Chloe, in the end, she's the only character I can see that would genuinely care for her even at her new size, her own family has all abandoned her at one point in her life and that includes her sister who even now is looking to use her sister more than help her from the looks of it. Genuinely speaking, if she could get the giantesses to start seeing her as a person then she'd be pretty set even if she imprints on them, but Chloe is literally the only person who stuck by Annabelle, even in her (fake) death.
So yeah, I'm hoping for an Annabelle-Chloe ending of some kind. When it comes to imprinting, not sure, I'd say Harper is best since she seems to be the 'closest' to Annabelle of all the giantesses, but honestly, if Annabelle doesn't imprint on herself or one of the girls, I can see her imprinting on multiple people or even end up doing something even more strange, like being able to imprint at will or something. I agree with Leah that she seems to have a habit of going above and beyond even if unintentionally.
But yeah, really like this story, rare to find any gts story with both, A. a tiny girl as the MC and B. an actual plot, rarer so for the story to have sexual content and to have that be the be all end all of the story. So yeah, keep up the great work, fingers crossed for Chloe and Anna.
Date: September 01 2023 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning
Wells it’s been three years now since this amazing story was started. I hope everything is going great for u. If/when u return I will be here.
Ps really hope everything is going good.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2023 7:47 PM Title: The Beginning
Want to check in to see if you alright, it been a while since you posted a new chapter, hoping you not going through something horrible in life or something else worst then that, anyway please get better soon and stay safe.
Date: January 09 2023 7:42 PM Title: The Beginning
Poor Nell. Has to do without despite a possible size fetish due to a moral code. No wonder she is obsessed on Annabelle, since Annabelle is virtually THE solution to the moral dilemma. Annabelle should just beware, since Nell can likewise only see her as a "means to an end".
Nell's good nature to Annabelle in the end serves less to take Annabelle's will into consideration, but to satisfy her own moral gut feeling, to finally be able to live out her size fetish without "bellyache".
Poppy also seems to have sensed that Nell has the potential to degrade one into an object.
Author's Response:
That's a really good point Yeso. Annabelle really is the perfect answer for her.
...Ugh, I like wrote an entire paragraph as a response to this comment, but I can't post it without spoiling the next chapter. So instead I'm just going to say you are extremely astute. I'm interested in what you'll think of the upcoming chapter then.
Date: December 17 2022 4:06 AM Title: The Beginning
So my interest in her Mother being big, is granted mostly kink related ( mother/daughter stuff), how ever there is the aspect that her mother left after Her sisters " death". This also tied in with the fact that she didn't want children, I think it would be interesting for her to see her daughter shrunk and probably going see this was why I didn't want children. Would she be cruel, indifferent or would her mothering side try to come back ( mind I don't think Annabel would except and help from her mother by choice, but that's the rub and the interesting part, if her mother is still big, ANnebell would be in no shape to ignore her mother, i mean her Mother could force the issue of helping her or what ever, yes I'm kinky and wouldn't mind seeing a mother daughter scene, but i don't think it would fit this story,. (Poor Annabell, most of us want to see her have a very bad time).
So yea that's why I would like to see her mother, and her still be big. Of course her being small would also have alot of potential, I really don't want her to be dead. Of course that would mean even more characters in this already massive story.
I was wondering, if there was any chance of an update this month,(christmas gift) other wise see you next year. Hope you have a Merry CHristmas and a Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Haha, everyone wants Annabelle to be miserable. But without going into spoiler territory, I've been going back and forth with how I want to deal with the whole issue of Annabelle's backstory/parents. You've given me a pretty interesting perspective.
Thanks Ralgar!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2022 3:15 AM Title: The Beginning
First off want to say great work at the started of the chapter with Naomi holding Annabelle down well her mother insert the tracking chip in her body, it was a very scary scene that drive Force that Annabelle was out of escape options now that she has a chip in her body making it permanent for her to remind the girls pet for the rest of the her life, the scene that got me next was the one that showed us Camilla, at first I thought she was going to be a feared and scared girl, but it was the complete opposite, she was confident and brave with the way she acted, but under all that she still misses her dad and doesn't want her dad to get hurt, also wanted to say I'm glad Annabelle used her charms to stop Naomi from killing Camilla, and I hope she can reunite Camilla with her dad somehow without them dying, ask for Naomi's dad thinking about getting Annabelle pregnant, I hope that's just a threat and not something being foreshadowed, for her future, if it is I hope it gets stopped before it happens, ask for the next scene I really do hate spiders, and I can't imagine how Annabelle can feel after that happened it was a good thing Nell saved her when she did, after that happened I believe the cage would be replaces something else so that never happens again maybe a dollhouse for Annabelle? As for the parents I can't believe they're willing to manipulate their daughters by having animal be used as a third wheel between Naomi and Nell but that's just me. P.s keep up the good work and sorry for not getting this review done sooner, I was busy brainstorming a theory on your series for the past few weeks I plan to post it on the review once it's done, about Annabelle and I strongly believe that Annabelle isn't a type zero but rather a new kind of shrink that hasn't been seen before and I hope you see it when it's posted when it's there for to hear your thoughts on it. Pretty good chapter so far and I hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Hey Nightwatch,
Camilla's characterization is something I had a fun time writing. I initially had her more timid, but it worked better with her being assured and confident (as much as a captured Shrinkee could be).
I can't comment on your theory, but there's a lot of things about to be revealed in the upcoming chapters when it comes to what's going on with Annabelle. I'm very excited (And terrified) for you guys to see the full reveal.
Thanks for reviewing Nightwatch!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2022 8:59 PM Title: The Beginning
Okay omg this story is the gift that keeps on giving, it gets better and better, and I have to say, the contrast between Naomi and Nell and her parents who are the first to openly say they would kill and dissect her, makes for a really good narrative. I love that even Naomi's parents have noticed her change and I truly believe that Naomi's feelings for Anabelle are honest. I just love her so much, I feel like she is getting higher in my steem hahaha
Also, I liked Camilla, and I really hope Anabelle can save her somehow. Now about Nell, there is a say in my country that goes "better the bad you know than the unknown good" or smth like that, roughly translated from spanish, and that may just be the case with Nell. Maybe Naomi knows something about Nell that we dont. Maybe the bug eating jokes means she eats shrinkies, though Naomi does that as well, or maybe she is the kind of shy loner with more problems than it meets the eye or wanting to control someone...?or maybe she is perfectly fine and I'm biased, Idk.
Now about Naomi's dad and that implicit threat of getting her pregnant...oh dear that would be some nightmare fuel.
Waiting for a new chapter soon!
Author's Response:
Hi Naoru!
Yeah, I think Naomi's change is really obvious to people who know her and closely watch over her (i.e her parents). Glad to see you like Naomi, she's going to have some solid moments to shine in the upcoming chapters.
And very intriguing thread you're pulling at with Nell. I won't say too much about that, but at the end of chapter 35, I think we see a glimpse of another side of Nell.
And yup, Annabelle being impregnated would not be fun for her or the victim--I mean baby.
Thanks for commenting Naoru! I love your insights!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2022 4:23 PM Title: The Beginning
This was a very interesting chapter to say at the latest but I wasn't expecting for Annabelle sister to not be a type 0 as well seeing they both are twins you would think both of them to be type 0 because of it being genetic, as for beth being the commander that was pretty obvious from the start but I really thought she would be like Annabelle as well so that a big surprise, as for bitty I still feel like he going to disobey his commander orders to save Annabelle but learn that her blood already infected a shrink many chapters go aka Rebecca, also i was thinking if Annabelle blood get tested by nami mother which found out about it and Annabelle has a another incident with Rebecca who influenced by her blood, like nami and her sister Nell see a obedient shrink wanting to serve Annabelle because of being influenced by her blood that nami decided to allow Rebecca live as a shrink servant or maid to Annabelle, which would allow Annabelle to have at least one companion even if said companion is obedient towards her, also i think it would show how danger Annabelle type 0 abilities are to others shrinks and because Annabelle doesn't want any shrinks to die she most likely would use her own blood or her own influence to keep shrinks like Rebecca live if it they get inflection by her, these are just My thoughts.p.s would love to see Annabelle reactions to seeing infected Rebecca again and how Annabelle reactions to her as well as nami and Nell reactions as well
Author's Response:
Hmm, the genetics of Type 0s is a little tricky. It'll come up more, but so far no one truly knows what causes someone to become a Type 0.
You're also right in realizing Annabelle's blood is a very important factor in this story. Can't say anything else, but you've got interesting predictions going on there. I'll be interested to see what you think of chapter 34.
I wanted to comment on the Rebecca of it all but...I won't. I don't trust myself to not accidently spoil anything.
Thanks for your comment Nightwatch, I like where your mind is at.
Date: October 01 2022 7:09 PM Title: The Beginning
Would like to write a post where it's more about the story itself than a chapter specifically:
As for the believability of the story, there is a weak point in my view, but it is very easily remedied by an explanation in the story.
People take it too easily for granted that the coffins are empty. If the BSA has been running their operation for decades, then it simply can't work that the world takes it for granted that the coffins are empty, no one really asks, there is no research on it. The father is even not really surprised to have lost two daughters in this way.
(But maybe this is explained somewhere and I just missed it)
However, it can be explained by the fact that the same scientists who think that shrunken people are not capable of surviving on their own, also think that the "sudden shrinking" could be intensified by fear of life. With the explanation the world resigned itself why with fake accident places of shrunk ones no corpses can be found.
According to these scientists, the fear of death should trigger shrinkage, which is why bodies are sometimes not seen at accident sites. However, no evidence can be collected on this, because the experiments on this would be unethical.
Apart from this, the story seems so frighteningly believable that I could almost believe here secret messages of a person from the upper class are sent.
Author's Response:
Hey Yeso,
Interesting comment about the coffins...can't say much about it, but it definitely is (briefly) mentioned again in an upcoming chapter, so good catch. I will say you're right in that there is a general societal understanding that Shrinkees will often die in ways that don't leave much of their remains. I can't speak more on it, but keep your eyes open in the chapters after the FF's home visits.
As for the believability of this story--thank you and I apologize in advance when this story jumps the shark in 3-4 chapters hahaha
Date: September 25 2022 7:13 AM Title: The Beginning
Gosh. This one is truly one of the best stories of giantessworld!
I'm really sorry Anna. She has lost so many things already, and every day she continues to lose more and more. I'm starting to fear that in the end she can even lose herself too.
I also really like the way you've done the giantesses. Each of them has an interesting character, and at times you can even feel sympathy for them. In another life they could even be good people, but unfortunately their parents brought up such an attitude towards the world in them.
I really want Anna to have at least one ray of light in this impenetrable darkness... And that's why I can't stop reading. I'm very interested in how her story will end.
Thank you for your hard work!
Author's Response:
Yeah unfortunately hardship isn't new to Annabelle. Losing herself is definitely a real danger for Annabelle, but she seems determined to prevent that from happening...we'll just have to see if she's successful in that endeavor.
And yeah, as much as I love a solid evil for evil's sake character (not to say there aren't characters like that in this story), the FF's truly are human--and sometimes they behave in a way that shows the worst of humanity. But their upbring shows how that mindset was created and nurtured.
And as for the light...the end is coming--whether it'll be full of light and hope, or darkness and despair...eh who can say?
Thanks for commenting and your kind words, Silver Stranger
--WOP
[Report This]Date: September 14 2022 11:46 PM Title: The Beginning
Thank you for the update - fully appreciate a masterpiece such as this takes time, but just wanted to let you know that I (and I'm sure others...) will be overjoyed to see the next chapter arrive!
Best wishes to you WOP :)
Author's Response:
Thanks redfoot, your comments are always appreciated. I look forward to yours every time I publish!
Date: August 29 2022 1:02 AM Title: The Beginning
Hey Guys quick update,
Got a lot of writing done this weekend. I'll be writing throughout the week when I have time. I think you guys are really going to enjoy this chapter. The plot is really coming together.
Thanks as always for your patience :)
--WOP
Date: July 11 2022 1:57 AM Title: The Beginning
Glad to hear projects are going well, Thankyou for the update and where u are with next chapter, for me 20,000+ words is fine, one thing I love about this story is the length of each chapter, it goes so fast no matter how long it is.
Date: July 11 2022 1:13 AM Title: The Beginning
Quick update: Still alive, so sorry for the wait. Life has been crazy, but I am wrapping up something that occupied my attention for a month and a half. I've still been writing whenever I can, so there chapter is almost finished. I'm aiming to publish Monday-Wednesday.
But Guys.
This chapter is long--irresponsibly long. I still have one more scene to add, but the current word count is 20,000 +. Let me know if that's absolutely fucking insane and I'll skim it down.
Thanks again for the wait.
-- WOP
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 8:26 AM Title: The Beginning
This is my first time making a review and I just want to say I really been enjoying this story for a while, I just read this story for the fifth time so far and I got to say I loving the to development of the characters and Annabelle, but I was wondering seeing as you said the story coming to a end soon after the FF background arc, I kind of wondering will this series be ending around fourty chapters then, or will it get to around fifty or sixth chapters before it end just curious. P.s your story is around my top three spot close to Deliverances by kardo.
Author's Response:
Thanks Nightwatch, as a chronic lurker, I appreciate your review. I'm not entirely sure how long this story will be by its end. The only limit I forced myself to adhere to was the two chapters per FF backstory rule, because if I didn't, I know this whole arc would be over fifteen chapters long. I mostly write based on plot points that I need to hit. Sometimes I'll realize I need to add a scene for a reveal to make sense later down in like five chapters, so then that may add to the chapter--and overall story--length.
So with that said, when I say coming to an end, I mean I have about five major plot points I need to hit--as opposed to the dozens that I already have. So after the FF backstories there is something else that happens that most can probably guess (the rule of parallelism and what not). Then I'm going to introduce something that has been simmering in the background--and then there's a mini arc/ B-plot that a lot of people will love/hate.
And you know what? I'm not going to say anything else, because I already feel like I may have somehow spoiled something.
But congratulations, Nightwatch, your first ever review and you managed to get so much outta me.