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Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2021 5:07 PM Title: The Beginning

I'm a long time lurker. I have posted like, one or two reviews I think?but nothing as in depth as this wonderful story deserves, so I thought I wanted to give it a shot so you won't think no one is reading you. This is truly one of the best stories on this website. As in, is currently the only one I keep tabs on, and I try to recommend it to as many people as possible. I check on this a lot for new updates and get so excited when there is a new one!

So the parents appeared, finally. Molly's parents are stern, and strict so is not a wonder that Molly is actually deeply insecure. Naomi's are very formal and probably traditional, which probably is related to her being so punk, as a way to stablish her identity as an independent person. Leah's are just what I expected, specially her dad, who is a very hard case of like father like daughter. Ngl he ended up being my favorite of the parents, so if you don't mind I'm going to imagine he is hot, for my own personal enjoyment. Is a surprise that Harper seems to have the best relationship with her parents. They both seem to love her, her dad teached her self defense, and I don't see as much conflict with them as I see with the other girls and their parents. Harper has gone up on my favorite list so hard she is now very close to Leah as my favorite. 

 

At this point I kind of want for the girls to know Anabelle's past, so they can bond, probably?and be on the lookout for Zoey if that is even included in the information they have. But hey, I'm a firm vocal supporter of an ending where Anabelle stays a pet and imprints on one of the girls, so there you go xDDDD I would be so happy with a harem ending or where Anabelle ends up with Leah or Harper like so, so much.

I'll be looking forward to the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Naoru! Your kind words mean a lot.


I love how you pegged all of the characters down cold. The parents are a lot of fun to write, and we'll be seeing some more of them since the FF have lost their bet to go away for the holidays (and ofc Warren is hot). I'm glad you like the characters so much! Based on the reviews I get, Leah and Harper tend to be at the top of the rankings. 

I wonder if their popularity will only get stronger or weaker when the future chapters come out...who can say :)

Thanks again Naoru, for the review.


Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2021 2:47 AM Title: The Beginning

Honestly the story was well worth the wait. Was hell waiting but the payoff when you saw there was a new chapter was incredible. Precipiceofoblivion is an amazing author and I still check their page hoping for the start of a new story all the time. The waits are bad for this story as well but there are always so many good stories that are getting updated on here that fills the time, example being the return of Eiko today. This is by far my favorite story on this site and it's worth waiting for new chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Tigerchevy! I know the wait can be long, but I hope you're still enjoying it!

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2021 11:48 PM Title: The Beginning

Just saw you responded. I can honestly say that curious girls is easily one of my favorite stories I've read, kept me invested for literally years. To break in a pet has all of the elements that made curious girls such a wonderful story. Looking forward to the continued success of your story and glad I could lead you to more inspiration.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I definitely blew through it in like a day. I can't imagine waiting so long to see the progression and overall conclusion of such a dramatic story. (Then again, I guess that's what I'm doing right now with this story haha) Thanks again for recommendation!

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 2:51 AM Title: The Beginning

Another intoxicating chapter. Yours is the only story I keep coming back to.



Author's Response:

Thanks Elliot! Sorry for the long wait times though!

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2021 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Another amazing chapter. So as for the length I'll reference literotica.com and say stories like Curious Girls or Sorority pledge are the best on the site and they have pretty long chapters so always the longer the better. Another plus to long stories is you can further the plot and add some smut without causing a conflict. Speaking of smut idk if you just arent a fan but we haven't seen any buttstuff yet with Naomi the last we haven't seen use Anna for pleasure maybe she could be into butt stuff? Or as I'm sure Zoey will get her hands on Anna at some point maybe her. Could be about her pleasure and Anna's torture with Zoey.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I actually checked out Curious Girls after reading this review. I see what you mean about the long chapters and the butt stuff lol. I will say that I was planning a very specific scene for that tag, but reading that story has given me a few other ideas so thanks!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2021 4:32 PM Title: The Beginning

An extraordinarily good story - absolutely love it when there's an update and I truly appreciate you writing such long and descriptive chapters. It's undoubtedly not easy to do so, so thank you for making the time!

This was one of the best chapters yet. So close to Zoey's clutches yet so far, and what a conclusion. My favourite giantesses are Leah and Zoey - both are powerful with people their own size let alone a tiny little bug like Poppy. Would love to see Zoey get her hands on her sister, perhaps even get her to imprint on her - that would be the ultimate horror to Annabelle. I might be the only one on here rooting for an 'unhappy' ending in this sense ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Can't say what's coming up, but this definitely isn't the last we've seen of Zoey.

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2021 6:32 PM Title: The Beginning

Yeh man. Pls. write more. My favourite story at the moment. I check every two days for an update.



Author's Response:

Wait no longer, it's up!

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2021 6:01 PM Title: The Beginning

Man this is so good! There's something about the dynamic between shrinkee and captor where the captor wants to break the shrinkee down to submission but still cares for them, that REALLY gets me going. So far Harper is definitely my favorite with probably Leah behind her. I love how openly attracted to Anna Harper is, the line where she says it'd be inevitable they end up dating made me swoon! I love the thought of Harper spoiling and pampering her reluctant pet, I think that's my favorite potential angle going forward.

 

I'll be honest, this is pretty fucked up of me, but I REALLY want to see the foursome get their clutches on Anna's family. That would be so insanely hot and I know the four girls would agree, I can already imagine Harper getting aroused at the thought. 

Definitely watching this for any and all future updates.



Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for reading! I think Harper's...enthusiasm, is one of the main elements that caused me to write this story in the first place. 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: ShadowVices Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 12:42 AM Title: The Beginning

What the actual fuck. Fuck these girls and their fucking families.

More please.



Author's Response:

Ha! Ironically, as I'm writing, I find myself either chuckling along with the giantesses, or muttering, "They fucking suck." 

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2021 4:44 AM Title: The Beginning

Okay, this is ridiculously good. RIDICULOUSLY.



Author's Response:

Ha! Thank you. THANK YOU.

But seriously, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2021 8:04 PM Title: The Beginning

Is it fucked up if I want one of the formidable four to fuck Zoey up?Be it best girl Leah or Naomi or Harper. Ruin her chances to recover Anabelle to torture her. Is it weird that I like the ff more than Zoey?Zoey creeps the fuck out of me xD 



Author's Response:

The devils you know, you know. Or in Annabelle's case—better the devils you know rather than the insane sadist you really know. 

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2021 6:51 PM Title: The Beginning

Looking forward to it, as much as I favor Harper and Leah I'm open to you changing my mind in favor of the others



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm really curious if people will maintain their favs, once we meet the giantesses' families. I have a feeling some rankings are going to be rearranged. 

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2021 8:18 PM Title: The Beginning

Next chapter can't get here quick enough.



Author's Response:

Ha! Wait no more!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2020 7:58 PM Title: The Beginning

Definitely Naomi or Leah. Harper is a maybe, and Molly is too dumb for me to root for her. It would be cool to have several alternate endings where she ends up with a different girl to explore all posibilities but for me is definitely Leah or Naomi.

 

Also I think Leah was upset because Anabelle was being all excited with the other girls during her episode and she felt jealous maybe?



Author's Response:

I'm definitely open to a "What-If" series if people are interested. Both the story's outline and ending are already solidified, but I'm always imagining other endings in my head for fun.


Reviewer: ShadowVices Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2020 1:47 AM Title: The Beginning

I am quite literally checking this multiple times a day to see if there's a new chapter. Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Check no more, it's up!

Reviewer: DRtGr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2020 7:12 PM Title: The Beginning

This has such a great potential for a series....And I never thought I'd get to hate antagonists as badly as these 4...If they are to be punished,I wish it to be by Annabelle's hand,not anyone else

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2020 8:50 AM Title: The Beginning

Fantastic story, it's got me hooked and invested to a painful degree, and I'm not sure my heart can take the possibility of a sad ending to this tragic tale. Great job all around. 

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2020 3:06 PM Title: The Beginning

Hoping you can find time to continue this story. It's one of my favourites on here and can't wait to see how it develops. Thanks!

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2020 8:44 PM Title: The Beginning

I don't know how I just discovered this story. But I've just made it through the first chapter and I am hooked! I can't remember the last time I read a story that gripped me so quickly. Please keep up the good writing. I'm really looking forward to the story ahead of me.

Reviewer: LatinReya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2020 1:49 PM Title: The Beginning

 Oh my! What an amazing story! The way you show everyone's personalities is so great that... It left me with some really complicated feelings. On one hand seeing our tiny little hero being dominated is hot, but on the other hand... I really hope poor Annabelle won't imprint on any of those four wannabe "goddesses".

 They are nothing but spoiled brats only able to pick on weak and helpless. Everyone, probably except Leah is pretty dumb aswell. Pathetic, really... Unworthy of our little heroine's worshipful devotion.

  She's both bright and talented. She's bright and courageous. She's humble and she deserves MORE! Either some gentle and caring lady who will truly recognize her or... The REAL monster. Predator in human flesh who can make her obey with a single word, subdue her with a single look, without resorting to some childish torture.  

 Like some powerful CEO who needs nothing more than few calm words to end someone's career or even life or a mighty politician who's decisions affect fates of thousands. Or perhaps some dreaded drug lord who doesn't care about the size of her prey and will put a bullet through normal sized human's skull as easily as she would squish a shrinkie. 

  Those are worthy of her loyalty. Spoiled co-eds with wealthy parents are not...

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