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Reviewer: alwaysyearslate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love the giantess content, and all of the humiliation and domination and such. It is quite a story like no other, and what I'm about to say is independent of the fact that this is beautifully written and interesting to read.

I'll focus on Leah for now. To put it simply, she's the weakest of all the characters (yes, including Annabel). Why? Simple. She believes herself superior to others because of her genes (I don't think I need to spell out exactly what kind of regimes Leah might support). However, the only people she ever excersises her "superiority" over are those who cannot fight back. That's weakness in my book. If she's so superior just by her genes, why does she need the help of a machine to assert said superiority? Can she or can she not win a fight against a person with HDD who has not shrunken? My guess is no. And she knows she can't. Maybe she does know she's a small, small person who tries their best to act as if an end won't come to her just as mercilessly as it came for so many that she's killed. And thus, she knows nothing. No matter how many she kills, she can't change the fact that she is only human, and a single human is no more than a blip on the earth. Leah's death won't be felt any more than Annabel's, and to pretend so is a fool's way of convincing herself superior. The fact that she is rich and has no consequences for her actions plays into it, but everyone knows how little spoiled rich kids contribute to the world. Leah's character is layed out already. She thinks herself more than human. She thinks that all of those murders will help her. And whether there's an afterlife or not, there is still no hope for Leah. She remains less than each individual she thinks herself superior to.

 

Harper, Molly, and Naomi haven't been layed out as clear, and as far as I can tell they're just apathetic and selfish, and just take Leah's word because it means they dont have to work to better themselves at all. But we'll see what kind pf people they turn out to be. But one thing's for sure. I won't be shedding any tears if the world lost those four.

Reviewer: Firestone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

Gotta say, I really hope the little thing imprints on Harper. Even when she was full-size, Harper wanted to possess her - and now she actually can!



Author's Response:

I have a special place in my heart for Harper. She's the only one of the Four who noticed Annabelle before she shrunk. She really does love her...in her own demented way.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Jesus Christ...

 

After years of Jacksmith and gtswburg and countless others since like 2003/4, I've never felt more sympathy for a tinies plight than possibly right now.

 

If people aren't rooting for Ann they might not be human.



Author's Response:

Ha! I always enjoy your reviews, Adam. Annabelle definitely has some difficult times ahead of her.


Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is absolutely phenomenal. My favourite story on here!

Can't wait to see her get weaker, more of a pet - so powerless in their presence. Want to see Leah become her God.



Author's Response:

Thanks, there definitely will be more of a struggle for Annabelle to maintain her "self" as the chapters progress. Though I can't say if Leah will "win" Annabelle in the end, there will be a lot of moments when Annabelle may have to do certain unsavory things for her tormentor. 

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