Reviewer: Monkey Typewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

So, I’m back. Genuinely couldn’t stay away. This story is the weirdest source of simultaneous morbid fascination and wild fantasy to me. I have some predictions I would like to make from a chapter 7 and what I’ve read so far, and this is based on my best guesses of story/most fervent wishes that these four pieces of human waste are destroyed in every way that matters.

Keep in mind, these are guesses and assumptions.

1–Type 0 ‘imprinting’ is the opposite of what most think—rather than become addicted to a single person, people become addicted to them. Easily explainable that the ‘facts’ on them are editorialized by said type 0s that exist. My reason for this is every one of Annabelle’s torturers being immediately enraptured upon seeing her new form/the ‘peacocking’ explanation, and that it makes more sense that she releases addictive pheremones now rather than getting addicted to a normal size person’s, as she is the one that changed to be ‘desirable’ and desiring others doesn’t make you desirable inherently. Admittedly more than a bit wishful thinking—I want to see Annabelle BREAK these bitches.

2–Annabelle’s sister is also a Type 0 and still alive. Seeing as they’re twins, I think it’s feasible, though admittedly without more info on exactly what happened to her/her funeral, whether or not it was empty casket or not, impossible to truly call. The rarity of Type 0s though, the focus on the rich and powerful covering them, and Leah’s dad’s mild interest in Annabelle make me think he may own her. Again, nothing to base this on but best guess.

3–things get violent between her captors. This is almost 100% wishful thinking—I just want them to destroy each other, or for Annabelle to destroy them.

WriteofPassage, you are a great writer. The fact that this makes me so uncomfortable, while still making me feel compelled to read, is incredible to me. Awesome work.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words! Your predictions are fascinating!  I can't speak on them specifically, but I will say the giantesses' families will make an appearance in the upcoming chapters—and they will definitely reveal a great deal of things.

Reviewer: Firestone Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

Heeeeeeeell yes! Excellent chapter~ also, on the note of horror, I gotta go the exact opposite route as the other commentor, size fetish works best when it's nearly indistinguishable from horror.

That said, it's your story, and I have every confidence it will be satisfying no matter what. Oh, also hot as hell. Keep it up!