[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.
It is so rare to find some personality building in erotic stories and you managed to create some twisted dynamics between Annabelle and her four captors.
Some smut scenes as well as some dialogues, at least for me, highlights how twisted and confused the giantess train of thought and their view of what they are doing can be. Sure, now that she is shrunk they, as a group, treat her as a cute puppy, but alone the story can be very different.
Harper already stated (in a very dellusional way) that, if not shrunk, she would eventually date Annabelle. And that bath scene with Leah... that question of what if Annabelle imprint on anyone that isn't her... and that reaction...
These scenes and dialogues are obviously no accident and they make the reader wonder: what does each giantess really want from "their" Poppy? Do they just want to exercise power over the helpless or some are trying to prove a point to themselves?
Bottom line, the psycko and kinky group relation built aroud the tiny and her captors makes you question why each monster is a monster right now... Or maybe I am just overthinking the main cast. Who knows? I certainly don't.
What I do know is that, as of right now, this is my favorite ongoing story on the site.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Date: November 22 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Quickly becoming one of the best stories on the site. It's hard enough to write one compelling villain, let alone FOUR of them in one story. There are of course some well-known tropes mixed in among our four Giantesses, but the execution is done so well with them and everywhere else in the story that I'm sure any reader would be willing to forgive.
You have got me hating the bigs and rooting for the small in a way that I can't really remember. They are just... so fucking evil. And Poppy-er, Anabelle is so easy to root for. From her determination, to the way she views the world, to how she cares about others.
And on top of that the smut is all high-tier. From the massacre to the sex scenes to the casual domination, to the smells and foot related stuff. There's literally something for everyone here.
Ten chapters in and I'm already confident in calling this a masterpiece in the making. Thank you for sharing.
Date: November 22 2020 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chaptor, really love the inshoe content as well! Always look forward to reading your work
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
You've crafted such hatred in a fetish story, beautiful in the way to get across how terrible these four really are.
The Chloe/Oliver thread gives me and Belle a little hope for the future but it seems a tough hill to climb all the same.