Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

You’ve built such an interesting cast of villains, with such a complex relationship with the heroine that I simply can’t hate them, and that is proof of good writing.

 

It’s interesting to see the difference in the treatment the giantesses give Anna in comparisson to others, and how Anna is aware of the affection they have towards her. She became “a fixture in their lives”, so treating her with care and worry is now perceived as only natural by Anna and her captors. The shrunken girl even catches herself enjoying Leah’s caress.  

 

I saw some people wishing Harper or Leah whoped Zoey ass... I think the clash will happen, but it won’t be pleasant or easy for any of the parts involved. Much like themselves, Zoey’s feelings for Anna are twisted, and this is not just about making her unpredictable and dangerous, but also about looking into a mirror.

 

I am more interested in how each giantess will react upon seeing how traumatized Anna is because of her past. Some might not give it much thought and some might want to avenge Anna... and that will dictate the future of the story, because wanting to hurt Zoey for Anna’s sake changes the nature of the relationship – Anna will seize being just a slave and become something more precious, someone worth protecting from harm (past and future). Not Poppy anylonger.

 

Harper is the obvious choice, she will want to jump at Zoey, but more out of jealousy and spite than care. I picture Molly and Naomi going after Zoey only if their pride is hurt. But Leah, ice queen Leah, is another story. Her dialogues and interactions with Anna built up a kind of tension between the two that you just can’t put your finger on. 

 

And yet, you can tell is something more going on in Leah's mind when she is with her Poppy.

 

Yes, if I had to guess, I think it’s Leah the one who will want to step up against Zoey and find her match on a psychological level. They are the ones who really want Anna, they will try to hurt each other to the end. 

 

And what will make the difference for Anna in this traumatic reckoning with the past, ironically,  is the affection she knows Leah and the others hold towards her.

 

Least but not last, their is the type 0 theories and mysteries. Chapter 15 once more foreshadowed the four families deep interest in our heroine, while revealing type 0 is regarded a myth even among shrinkees. Her abilities and their extent (even the imprint) are, therefore, unknown. This is a really good plot device to push the story forward.

 

Two last questions:

1. I am not saying the 4 spoiled and cruel girls shouldn’t pay for what they did so far, but what you think? Is redemption for any of the giantessess possible? 

2. How many chapters do you estimate the story will have?

 

Well, that’s it for now. Hope some of my ideas can help you in the writing process. 

Sorry for the long comment and for any mispealling or mistakes.

 

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Already eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Okay, first of all thank you! Sometimes when I'm writing this story, I'll put it in the back burner because it is more of a way to get some creative juices flowing, but then I'll come back to this site after a week or two and see all the fantastic comments. It helps me remember that there's actual people who are reading this story and care about how it ends. 

Once again, I really like reading your comments, Mr. In A Suit. I can't get into the accuracy of your observations, but I like how you think. 

As for the questions:

1. I love all of my characters, so they'll never need to be redemed in my eyes, but as for the readers?  Who can say? I have an ending to the story already outlined, so you'll just have to see if the FF are "redemed" by the end.

2. Oh god. If you recall, I said that we would be going into the giantesses' backstories soon—I believe that was three months ago. Like I said, I have an outline, but often the chapters end up becoming too long, or I'll realize I want to include a scene that delays my time frame. For example, I thought the funeral scene and the (spoiler for chapter 16) visiting Annabelle's house scene was going to be in the same chapter—and you saw how that turned out. I'm not a fan of stories that are drawn out, so I'll tentatively say I want the story to be finished in under 30 chapters. 

Thanks again for your continued support!