Date: April 22 2021 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Another fantastic chapter, really appreciate the work. Out of the possible pairings of girls I'd have to say I have two duos that I'd be interested in mainly, though all of them are intriguing and unique.
1) Molly/Harper - I adore Harper and she's up and away my favorite character so far, other than our protagonist Anna. I don't have much of a love for Molly's personality or anything but I have a soft spot for giantesses with a little extra weight on them, turns me on a little bit more and I know with Harper things would be going down an already sexy path.
2) Harper/Leah - This right here is potentially the most dangerous combo in terms of Anna imprinting. I feel Harper's raw attraction to her appeals directly to the core of Poppy's being. That desire to worship and be adored. However Leah seems to be quite good and dismissing whatever humanity Anna tries to cling to. She knows exactly what to say to crush her spirit while still showering the shrinkee with her own form of love.
Gotta say I still have my fingers crossed they go after Anna's father or someone else close to her, would really destroy Anna but would be very fun for us readers. On a side note, I was really happy to see the way they defended Anna from that Luke guy. They really do love her, even if it's in the way a pet is loved. It seems more than just your average pet though, like Anna holds a special place in all their hearts. I can't wait to see who gets imprinted assuming that day does come. I also hope maybe some more mouthplay is introduced, that cereal scene with Molly is low key one of my favorites.
Author's Response:
The reasons for your pairings are really interesting. I can't say too much, but I think you'll be pleasntly surprised in future chapters. Also, I look forward to adding more direct scenes with the giantesses (both mouthplay and others) as they "play" with Annabelle. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
I also think some Leah/Naomi or Leah/Harper interactions would be interesting... But what I really want to see is Harper, Naomi and Harper dealing with crazy Zoey while Poppy is lost at their feet XDD... yeah, I like all characters, but Molly is not my favorite.
Author's Response:
Ha! I also enjoy those pairings, but curious to see in the next coming chapters if you (and others) will have a change in rankings.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
More and more the story portrays Anabelle as special for all four giantesses... As for what they represent for Anna... it’s complicated.
This line about Naomi picked my interest: “She'd actually preferred it if Naomi dialed back on the affection, but she didn't understand why she was so insistent on maintaining her bad-ass persona.”
That line reminds of the interactions Annabelle had with Naomi in ch. 11 – “All of the giantesses treated her with cloying affection, but Naomi seemed to up it to 110% when they were alone. Annabelle figured it was because her public persona of bad-ass, cold, aloof punk-rock princess didn't allow her to show her girlier, more affectionate side. Unfortunately for Annabelle, that meant she received the full brunt of it whenever they were alone.”
With that in mind, I think more interactions with Naomi would be interesting – for example: Molly mockers Naomi sense of style and true behavior, but Anna later sooths her, saying she prefers that side of Naomi over her public persona.
Also, the part Where Zoey’s size is highlighted and Anna cant help but imagine how it would be “to be down on the ground near a gigantic Zoey”.... marvelous! I too want to see these reactions - of Anna, of Zoey... and of Poppy!
Thanks for all the hard work, answering comments and continuing the story. Right now, this is my favorite on-going story on the whole site.
Author's Response:
Your comments are always so dangerous, Mr. Suit, because I am always tempted to give some things away. I love how you notice the little lines I leave behind for the future development of the plot. I had hopeed that future chapters (and the ending) would spur people to re-read the story, so they could pick up on all the clues I dropped, but you seem to be ahead of the crowd. Thanks again for commenting!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I enjoyed the Fearsome Four shitting on the jocks, for once they were able to use their evil for good instead of well...
The Daniel section was masterfully written, you really showcased their ability to turn on a dime in any given situation. Though I kind of expected him going home with them to eventually lead to their demise but that thread seems snipped.
I'm ready for Zoey to take on the Governer, The Dean, The Chief, The Corporation and any other other Buffy or Walking Dead villains they have to get through.
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As for your question, I'm kind of partial to Leah/Naomi. Bad ass punk girls and/or asian are kind of high on my list etc. They both seem like they would destroy Harper/Molly if given the chance. Like they would be the Lord Zedd/Goldar to the other two's Rito and Finster.
Author's Response:
Ha! This comment made me laugh so hard. Yeah, while I'd agree that Leah and Naomi are formidable in their own right, Harper and Molly may just surprise you.
Date: April 18 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Still enjoying, hopeful for a little action in the next chapter but I understand the need to build the story. As for combos doesnt really matter to me as long as Harper is one, easily my favorite giantess.
Author's Response:
Yeah, although I think the giantesses hidding Annabelle in plain sight within the locket/necklace is fun, my I love to write their direct interactions with each other.