[Report This]Date: June 05 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
First, let me start by saying I can’t remember any story discribing a vore experience like yours. Anna’s awe when confronted with the noises of Naomi’s organs was magnific.
Also, the size comparisons When Zoe is presente are a good touch. Leah and cia. are scary and powerfull from Anna’s perspective. But Zoey is a monster, a mountain, a force of nature... a titan like you put it.
Poppy can come out and play with the giantesses because Anna is still able to make the distinction and see them as humans, really big, really messed up human beings. Zoey is different, she is a monster, a demon to her sister.
Now, for the meat of this chapter.
If you ask me, we witnessed some really deep bounding time between Naomi and Anna. Why? Well, because Anna was inside of her! You can’t get much closer on a physical level... but then she is bathed on Naomi’s puke! I am curious to see if this experience will have some after effect on either of the two.
Fingers crossed to see more Naomi x Anna momments.
Anna is a special existence to Leah and cia. They probably never had so much interaction with someone outside their circle and a tiny nonetheless. But it will all come down to how each one will react once their respective families act, because to their fathers and mothers, Anna is just a special type of tiny, a precious lab experiment.
About Oliver... I think he should die. Seriouslly. He Always ends up being a light of hope, a good memory to Anna... what if he ends up dying without ever fiding out she was alive? Just a tought... I don't want him and Annabelle to just end up together like a happy couple kkkk
Your story is always worth the wait. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had never written vore before so I was a little nervous. I'm glad you noticed the difference between how Annabelle perceives the FF vs. Zoey. As for Naomi X Annabelle...well there will be a lot of one-on-one moments with each giantess in the future.
Again, thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to know someone's reading
Date: June 04 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awww I actually feel so bad for Anna. The whole bit with her mother and sister Beth really had me emotional. I hope after all this is over she has an adoring owner that loves and spoils her!
I really do like that the giantesses act with compassion and concern when it comes to Anna. It's just so crazy considering how they would kill hundreds of other shrinkees without a second thought, yet they are all head-over-heels for their precious Poppy.
I will say I'm glad that Zoey failed to get her hands on Anna, I much prefer her being in the possession of people who actually care for her even if it is in their own twisted ways. I had no idea where you were going with the story after the dog took the necklace, I thought for sure Anna was going to end up getting found by Zoey but again I'm glad that wasn't the case.
I keep checking everyday for updates on this, so please keep it going! Absolutely love it so far.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Annabelle's family trauma will definitely be making a reappearance in the coming chapters. One of my favorite things about writing this story is emphasizing the difference in how the giantesses treat Annabelle vs. any other Shrinkee. Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was fucking incredible!
Maggie should've ran out of the room but damn good dog.
I feel bad cause I really want the main four big bads to get theirs but I also kind of want Zoey to find Anna at the same time down the road.
Not sure where this goes next but I hope the rich girls have found their worthiest advisary in mighty Zoey.
Author's Response:
Maggie is definitely a good dog! Also, I can't say much, but the giantesses will find that getting Annabelle to imprint won't come as easily as so many other things in their lives do.