Date: July 06 2021 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love the long chapters. And can't wait for the next one top drop.
My ONE criticism is the overuse of the word "cooing" which I notice among many authors. Other than that, this could be 1000 chapters and I'd keep coming back.
Author's Response:
Thanks Elliot! I actually agree! I cntrl "F" the other day and saw how much I was using it lol. Thanks, I'm always trying to improve my writing. Hope you keep enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wasn’t fully satisfied with my first comment, so I deleted and changed it a bit. Now it’s good. Sorry for any confusion.
I don’t usually write about the sex scenes... but boy the depiction of Anna and Molly having sex was HOT!! And that’s because you prepared the mood so well, making a perfect transiction of a sentimental part (Molly genuinely opening up to Anna) to a sexy (Anna tickling and turning Molly on). Perfect. Just perfect.
In a past comment I said didn’t like Molly Much... I FULLY TAKE IT BACK! The depiction of her room as lacking personality and seeking approval and carnal attachment from HER TINY! So much emotions in only one chapter.
I think this story is especial because you are playing with appearances and expectations, and it all culminated in this two chapters, with a Molly full of lust and adoration saying “ I don't think I really understood what being your Goddess meant until recently” (great dialogues by the way), with Harper and Naomi expressly saying Poppy deserves to be WORSHIPPED!
They started as cinics, answering the espectations of society, while internaly fancing themselves as goddess allowed “breaking” in ocasional sprees of violence disdain and hatred for tinies, But see them now. They still think They are superior? Yes but they are showing outside signs of turmoil, to and for a tiny nonethelss. That, i see as the irony of the story, as well as kind of the tragedy of it’s antagonists.
You can theorize the giantesses inprinted on Anna, but I think it’s too early to draw conclusions about what imprinting really is and about the feelings of each character. It’s twisted relations all over since the beginning, with Harper “crush” and Leah’s amusement of Anna wits, and that’s what is so good about writing: you can portray any relation in all it’s complex contradictions (also why I don’t like Anna x Oliver. Too predictable kkk).
The giantesses are opening up to her, they love her. What about Poppy? She has to open up about Zoey, but not before coming clean about her fears about the 4 themselves. As I see it, Zoey and the mighty families are the true villains here... and will be instrumental for bounding Poppy to the giantesses even more than imprinting.
Sorry for any mispeals. I can’t imagine how much work you put into these long chapters and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Been waiting all week to read this. You always manages to surprise me!
About your question, I like long chapters - you can work more than one storyline at once, mixing many elements without rush - and think the length of this last chapter was good, it ended right were it needed... I ended already wishing for more Kkkkkkkk.
On a side note: any chance of a scene where Anna willingly ends up under a giantess sole and tickling her feet? Than, as pay back, Anna has her own feet worshipped... kkk
Author's Response:
Thanks Mr. In A Suit! I'm glad you're warming up to Molly. I may be a little biased, but I firmly believe that all of the giantesses have something special to offer Annabelle. Now whether she'll end up accepting it or not is another story.
As always, I love your analysis. I can't say much but both Annabelle and the giantesses are going to be forced to open up and get vulnerable in order to achieve the things they want. How each character will react to one another's' past? Who can say?
As for your side note: we'll just have to see, won't we ;)
Date: June 27 2021 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved this chapter. I'm glad we're back to the giantesses interacting with Annabelle directly. The necklace chapters were certainly well-written and enjoyable nonetheless, but in my opinion nothing beats having them interact with her openly. Love all the teasing and adoring they do, seriously the best part of this story for me is the unique relationship where the goddesses truly love Annabelle in a unique way that is honestly hard to describe.
I'm surprised it's been awhile since we've seen the alter-ego of Poppy show up. With how things were going here I thought for sure she would pop up near the end bit with Molly. Have to wonder how much playing along is pushing her psyche more and more towards that of "Poppy."
Cannot wait until the next chapter, honestly this is the best ongoing story on the site for me, the other ones I was interested in seem to not be getting anymore updates unfortunately. I have absolutely no issue on how long the chapters are, genuinely there is no such thing as "too long" in my book. That being said, I can only hope the fact that this chapter being broken up leads to a quicker release of the next installment!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Huggler! I have to say, I'm glad you like the dynamic between the giantesses and Annabelle (their interactions are also my favorite part to write). We're slowly going to be finding out a bit more about "Poppy" in the upcoming chapters. Stay tunned!
[Report This]Date: June 27 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
You win some and lose some, Anna won the mission the of finding the chef's daughter and even managed to possibly find a weak link in the terror chain with Molly's new found self esteem thanks to her.
That said she kind of lost the war of not ending up as a sex toy yet again but at least it was the closest to a heartwarming moment as we may ever get with a giant person in this story and anything naughty coming from them.
As for the chapter length they are long yes but with things like this, Endless, The Fire story(forget the name but the one with Isobelle and Sabrina etc) the read is more than worth it.
Author's Response:
Thanks Adam! Annabelle has these little moments that give her motivation to keep keeping on. Whether it'll lead to freedom, we'll just have to see.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another wonderful chapter - thank you!
Wonder what the giantesses will do if they find out what Poppy really thinks about Zoey. Will they see the fear she instils in her stepsister and crave dominance over rather than love for Poppy?
Just love this story, and am so pleased whenever I see an update. My personal preference therefore would be for chapters to be as long and detailed as possible :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, and I'm also really excited to showcase the giantesses' "discovery" of Annabelle's past life. A lot of fun things are coming up. :)