Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

A lot to unpack here, so I just let my imagination run wild with theories a little. Sorry in advance for any confusion and/or mispealing.

First we have the inner dialogue of Annabelle but it’s different: the voice adresses giantesses, not as masters, but as passionate, fearsome protectors, a role we’ve seen the “goddesses” fully take on the last couple chapters - and this ch. 19 cements that.

While Bennet highlights the gentleness and care the four have - and that usually goes unseen by Annabelle – Leah getting aroused on such a tense situation just by having Anna betwen her toes (great scene by the way) shows how deep her lust for Poppy really is.

Also, this chapter leaves beyond any doubt the fact that the four have every move carefully surveilled to a suffocating degree (and I am not just talking about that huge ass security team) as well as the fact they straightout fear their own parents, highlighting the bubble they live in... maybe a bubble the four built around themselves to protect each other.

The story had already hinted sometimes that Leah, Naomi, Molly and Harper feel loonely and are forced to act roles they did not necessarily choose... but they choose to keep Annabelle close and have her inprint, they choose to take the role as her goddesses. And I think if the Type 0 is affecting them, it’s because they choose Anna... and now Anna has to choose them.

Anna has to choose, not Poppy (whatever she really is). But what does it means to choose? With the long awaited introduction of the four parents their is a window for Annabelle to see her powerfull goddesses in a fullblown vulnerable state, more in need of her worship than ever before... and so she will try to help and choose... choose to worship them! This will be the final twist for these twisted relations. What will happen after? I don’t know, but if the families are willing to spend billions on researchs about type 0, it’s damn important and incredible to them.

I am guessing we will see more of the giantesses alone with Poppy and their respective families as each one will be eager to see... their daughters? No! The most wanted type 0! Take that for guilty Anna kkkkkkk.

Last but not least, I would like to point out the sweetest scenes of the chapter are with Naomi... call me crazy, but Anna clutching her thumb with Naomi gennuinelly concerned for her safety is just too cute. Also Harper punching Bennet, even fighting John so she could finish the bastard. Beautiful, Harper at its best.

As always, I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story with us. I am loving every chapter and how you are developing things. Long or short, if there is an update I will read and review it until this story is over.

Author's Response:

I love reading your reviews Mr. in A suit! Your analyses are always so interesting to read. You're picking up on some characterization that will be explored in further chapters (part of the reason why the parent chapter is taking so long).

Like always, I can't speak too much on your theories, though I will say when this story is over, it will be fun to re-read your comments. 

Also, I'd like to mention that your little comment on Naomi and Annabelle's interaction was the catalyst for the little scene I just posted--so thank you!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Part 1: The catsuit fits perfectly in this living nightmare, like another way for them and the universe to drive home the point to Anna that she is nothing more than a pet to these vile girls no matter how much she wished otherwise.

I am shocked they teased eating her again so soon after the last time nearly cost them their precious ""Poppy". I know they're evil incarnate but I would have thought they'd care just a bit about her PTSD on the matter.

I am rooting for Anna's triumphant win when this is all over...however you've dangled the Zoey carrot in front of us. A horrible girl through and through but damn if the big jock bully fan in me is not kind of rooting for it now...I'm horrible, I've made peace with this.

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Part 2:

 

Jesus Christ...you just can't let poor Anna have a bit of peace can you? First she gets scared by the thunderstorm without her trusty and noble bun bun and then she gets a chance at escape but gets shanghi'd by a massive pervert with an obbession for the very people who took her life away. If I didn't know any better I'd think this was a fetish website or something.

I will say though I am rooting for them to fuck up his life proper though. Smite somebody who actually deserves it for once instead of the poor souls they usually ruin.

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Part 3: Even when her life was in mortal peril the giantesses still found time to gain immense pleasure from her suffering, she really is fucked if a hail mary doesn't come soon. The way they systematically broke him down while being a simp/not in his right mind due to booze shows how truly powerful they are alone or as a united front which shows what Anna is really up against here.

 

The ending while light hearted still seems like a punch to the guy for Anna knowing they'll get off scot free with the only real comeuppance coming to anyone being the perv possibly and the poor soldiers trying their best to do their jobs.

Author's Response:

Hey Adam, as always you pick up on some interesting details. Yeah, the FF's response to trauma is not recommended by the American Psychiatric Association. And Don't worry, I'm also a Zoey stan. So far she's only been a few chapters, but damn it if it isn't fun to write her. She'll definitely be making a reappearance.  

Thanks for reviewing Adam, your comments are always fun to read.