Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2021 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

While reading this ch. 20, I confess I felt like Anna and I just couldn’t believe Naomi's madness was... making sense! LOL!! It started with a very romantic mood and by the Middle I was like “WTF?! I can’t agree with her!”. Yes, I was preety much feeling as guilty as Anna by the end of the chapter. And that is the result of very good writing.  

Good work with the moonlight and Naomi’s description. Anna is scared and confused about the changes that keep on happening with her and the giantesses – in a short span they went from sadistic killers to her owners and now to some kind of deranged guardians – and she is conflicted about how to react. So, she is making a escape her top priority.

Annabelle questioning if she is loving monsters and becoming a monster herself because of it is the logical conclusion of this inner conflict, and illustrates perfectly how Anna is someone that tries to shoulder the world, taking responsabilities even in this situation.

A smaller but powerfull chapter, can’t wait for the next one. And thanks for the kind responses to my comments, they mean a lot. Really glad the reviews are somehow helpfull and interesting.

Author's Response:

Yeah, thanks Mr. in A suit. As a chronic lurker, I understand that most people don't comment, but sometimes it can feel like I'm submitting my writing into a void lol. That's why I appreciate the comments (especially the ones that let me know what you're liking/what you'd like to see). 

Speaking of, about the tickling—I've been working on another story and I may have added a scene that is very similar to your request ;)

Also, I cannot wait for you guys to read the chapters where Anna's psyche is explored.