Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

Took me a while but better late than never. I know exactly what you mean, writing takes courage and patience... I have none, so I thank the heavens for blessing the world with people like you XD

About the latest chapter, Leah’s father really steals the show, forcing a full honest reaction even from Anna. And, yes, they all have serious issues - treating a meeting with there daughter’s  as business trade is just sad.

But, we got to see the 4 once more stand up for Anna and even defend, in their own twisted sense, her status as a living being. Moreover, They proved They want her more than Money and that’s interesting because it got me curious about how far each one is willing to go to be with Poppy.

 I would like Anna to give the giantessess some credit. They clearly care for her, even turning down their parentes offers. Which brings me to the aftermatch of what happened in this chapter.

First things first, 3 giantessess will be angry at Poppy for reacting the way she did, all except Leah. As unlikely as it might be, I am betting she will empathise more with Anna’s angry towards her father nasty low blow of using her own mother as bait. Leah is probabily familiar with the governor ways and be more understanding because of some bound feeling, and will get the others off Anna’s back.

There is also the problem with the tinies. What will be Anna’s reaction after seeing yet another carnage? Will she finally break? Or will she try to reason with the 4 and convince them not to take part in the parents madness? After all, the feast is just another move to smooth them laid by the governor.

 But the most exciting is the file. It’s obvious the governor has information about all the hardships in Anna’s life, and the giantesses reaction to her past is another chance of bounding and being redeemed, at least a little, in her eyes.

Yes, I am gonna bet the 4 can be redeemed and trully love Anna... as warped as that might be it’s not impossible... I think... I hope... I don’t...know kkkkkk

Also, before I forget... DIE OLIVER! DIE! JUST DIE! WHAT A BORING CHARACTER!! Sorry, but I just find him infuriating as some sort of romantic end game for Anna, simply plain and annoying.

Sorry it’s not as detailed as some of my other theories, but it’s been a rough couple of weeks. Your chapter is one of the few good things that happened, loved Anna swearings. I didn’t realized before, but are you perhaps familiar with portuguese?

Author's Response:

Mr. In A suit, your hatred for Oliver will never not make me laugh. Though if I were in your shoes, I would probably view him as a hindrance also. 

I also love how you see the giantesses as defending Annabelle--something she has yet to acknowledge. I can't say too much, but I'm really excited for the next few chapters.

As always, your predictions are fascinating. Sometimes your ideas are honestly better than what I have outlined. And I am familiar with Portuguese, but not enough that didn't have to check with some friends and google translate, before I wrote the dialogue. 

That's the thing about making characters ethnically diverse, I end up having to double check everything. I'm not complaining though. When Annabelle's familial background is delved into a bit, it'll have (hopefully) all been worth it.

Thanks again for your review, they're always so interesting to read.