[Report This]Date: November 13 2021 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Naoru's comment made me realize I left out a important thing/explanation. In my opinion, the feelings the people that imprint on Anna have are not fake. The fantastic four already proved beyond doubt that they holyheartedly care for her and would not be able to cary on without her – and that’s the catch. The imprint maxxes out everything – not only care and tenderness, but clyngness, lust and possessiviness – Annabelle herself questions if the 4 girls bound would be able to withstand a fight for the type 0 and I think the answer is pretty obvious (no, it would not).
When I commented the type 0 power is “a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not”, I meant if it’s true or not from Annabelle’s side. The adoration and love of an imprint are always the true, her true and only self after rhe imprint, They can’t imagine how meaninless their lives were before Poppy.
And I will take this chance to point out another thing: Poppy high healing abilities might mean that, on a celular level, Annabelle is not aging anymore since her cells heal and change all the time. Yes, I think she is unable to die unless someone blow her head or entire body in a quick swift.
Oh yes, I want to see Anna strugle. She might think Nell will help her... and she probably will... but only if it means she will be her friend from now on... after all, Anna is so smart and kind... They were made for each other... (that’s me imagining inner dialogues again... and kind of wishing to see Anna despair and love her situation at the same time... am I evil for that? Kkkkkkkkkk)
That said, I don’t think her powers are unlimited – I therize her powers are limited by gender – a male type 0 has power over giants and male tinies; a female type 0 has power over giantess and female tinies – there is also the time (it’s necessary one afternoon or Half a day of direct interactions for the imprint to start.
That would explain why Rachel’s sister and Bennet did not imprint.
Well, thats about it. I thought about some scenarios involving Nell x Annabelle and Molly x Annabelle (their selfconscious and inferiority complex really hits me on na emotional level), and I can’t wait to see were we will be going from here.
Thanks again for the kind responses, for all the effort you clearly put into writing and for sharing your story with us!
Author's Response:
I for one love the diversity in theories over the story. Sometimes when I'm looking over my outline, I think about the theories you guys create. Sometimes I'm shocked when they're right on the money, and other times I'm impressed with how creative they are. My outline is pretty much cemented (i.e. Annabelle & the FF's fate, several major plot points, etc) but I'm definitely taking notes if I ever do a "What if" series.
Again, I can't seem to comment of your theories without giving anything away, so I will just say they are very fun to read, and I hope you will revisit your reviews after the final chapter has been published.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Everything in this late chapter, from Rachel to Nell, is perfect. Many revelations, many possible implications. Perfect job creating the game and the gore-y part, it made Annabelle and Poppy’s character shine and colide, while foreshadowing the endless hopelessness of their situation and own nature.
First and foremost, we have confirmation about the type 0 true capabilities, and I LOVE how you did it! Rachel’s wanting to lick more of Anna’s blood, her instant adoration after tasting it is strange and - dare I say it? – cute. It isn’t exagerated, the scene isn’t dragged too long and Anna’s assumptions that the girl has a concussion or is just expressing gratitude feels natural given their situation.
We also have confirmation: Poppy is trully overpower, proving our greatest enemy is inside kkkkkk. No, really, for majority, the power of a type 0 would be a blessing. To be the most important thing in the world for a person is often people’s idea about a perfect love. Poppy literally makes it a reality for Anna, for the bullied girl that always felt unwanted and unatractive even inside her family.
It’s a blessing for her and for the giantesses – she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her. And it’s also a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not. Tiny Annabelle/Poppy is, quite simply, the one True Goddess of all goddess in the plot, what for someone like her, is quite a tragedy. She isn’t human anymore and she never will be. She can’t come back and neither can the ones that imprint on her.
From here on, it’a all my especulations. As far as I can tell, it’s not automatic, but every girl that has too much contact will imprint. First, by looking comes the urge to touch and hold. Than comes talking and breathing the same air as her. After this first contact, lust will eventually overcome the person.
Since Rachel came into direct contact with Anna’s blood, the effects were very strong and automatic, but we can also see these syntoms with Penellope (Nell) now that we know the real nature of Poppy/Annabelle imprint.
Nell lacks the lust and is resistente in helping Annabelle, but, since the beggining is fascinated by her figure and wants to hold her. Moreover, she doesn’t pay attention to Anna’s correction about her name not being Poppy, almost as if her brain was unnable to make the difference.
Annabelle doesn’t realize she is Poppy or a side of it. That is the true nature of the One that is Annabele but isn’t at the same time. The type 0, who has three sides and is able to control both giantess and tinies. We have Annabelle (the kind and lonely one), we have Poppy representing lust and insecurities, and we have a third side – the side of angry and control.
Back to Nell, when Naomi implies she won’t be meeting Poppy again. The shy girl gets aggitated, eloquent and curses at her sister and friends. I think this will only get worse, she will worry more and more that she let her friend Poppy down, she will want to talk more with her one friend... than she will want to play with the only friend she needs.
Yes... Poppy said herself Naomi doesn’t treat her well. And Naomi already have friends, she should be the one with Poppy, the one to hold Poppy... the one to have Poppy at her feet like Naomi has the world at hers. Maybe... maybe Poppy is her world?
Just some theories and na inner dialogue I imagined. I will stop here. This is probably the longest comment i have ever written, so its bound to have mistakes. Sorry T_T
I know this site is most about erotic fiction and I love the kinky parts, but you are managing to bring us a beautifully tragic story together with it. Thanks for writing and always repling, I am really happy if my reviews help you. Your storytelling sure helps me.
Author's Response:
Mr. In a Suit, as you know I always look forward to your reviews. I read them multiple times as I write. However, they're so dang dangerous because I just want to discuss theme and plot with you. There's still a lot of plot points I have to hit, so I have to refrain from typing something that may be a spoiler.
That being said, your predictions are always fascinating to read. I like how you really analyze the characters. Very astute.
Thanks again for always commenting!
Date: November 10 2021 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow, i'm reading this just because of how good the story is. i don't even care about the gts stuff anymore.
Author's Response:
Thanks rubber! That's a hell of a compliment. I'll definitely have been lacking in the spicy stuff lately, but this new chapter has a bit of the traditional stuff. I'm glad you're liking the narrative.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2021 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Well hot damn that was a read, I'm glad Poppy got a small victory in the midst of all the chaos. She might have condemned Nick but thanks to her quick thinking she saved the life of the sister of the woman who gave her fingers to try to help her.
I'd like to say I'm shocked at the gore but given my history in the community I'd be lying, I've definitely seen worse but very creative game there. You really feel the evil in the room even more when somebody is forced to crawl along a table as nothing but a one legged torso.
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Naughty little minx, talking advantage of our heroine in her weakened state. Anna has been fighting a war on two fronts and holding her own quite well but you wonder how long she'll be able to fight off Poppy with everything else going on.
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Well. well it seems Anna has found an ally even if one trapped in a seemingly equal hell to her own but an ally all the same. I'm not sure where Nell goes from here but she's surely going to be a better help than she thinks right now.
As for the ending, I have feeling they are going to try to retaliate on the ghosts of Anna's past once she spills the beans. May god help them when Zoey kicks that ass.
Author's Response:
Ha, yeah I try to let Poppy win at least sometimes, otherwise It'd be a pretty morbid story. And yeah the giantesses seem to have a strange fixation on her past. But I love how enthused you are about the idea of Zoey beating down the FF lol.
Your reviews always make me smile, Adam.