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Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2021 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hello again, the only thing that i could think i would really like to see is a chapter for one of the fours pov, ( which might be spoilery territory, but u did say soon we would be getting in to there stories anyway,) . I have read this story twice now and getting rdy to read a third time ( it is just that good) and that i is the one think i miss, is seeing a chapter from pov of the villians, especially during a poppy episode.

Honestly the best outcome that i can think of for Anna is that she imprints on one of thie girls, (by the way I hope Rachel isnt an indicator of what Anna will be like when she imprints, that would take it out of bitter sweet to down right depression at least to me).  I also cant see Anna sucessfully escaping and being able to stay gone, she is worth billions and the only reason she isnt in a lab or elsewhere with people worse than the 4 (ergo their parents) is becuase of the 4.  IF she got away i see that becoming open season on her adn now everyone is going to come after her. People have done worse for millions let alone billions.  

So inconclusion while i love a happy end ( which would be either her father or honesly Cloe,( Nell is to beat down to protect her) and i have suspions about Oliver, I think realistically she needs to imprint and really bond with one of the girls ( if not all 4:P.)

Also i am rooting for either Leah or Harper ( prefer Leah, I think she could really protect Anna in the long run, Harper would be the one  i think would acutally care the most about her post imprinting, ( though really  i am acoutally rooting for all 4 ( a little becasue I will not be surpised if harper went all if i cant have her no one can kinda thing if she imprinted on any of the others like seriously theyu are all monsters but there is something not right in that girls head. Also i do think that all 4 have bonded with her on a minor lvl like Rachel did, just that because they are so big compared to anna it takes alot more and is diluted alot compared to poor Rachel. 

ALso plz spare Rachel.



Author's Response:

Hey again Ralgar!

Without going into spoiler territory too much, one of the FF will definitely be the pov of a pretty important chapter (probably my favorite chapter). 

Anna is up a creek with her entire escaping plot. I think she's coming to terms that it may no longer be a viable option for her. 

Lol and I'm glad you like Rachel, because that's who Annabelle ends up imprinting on. Haha, I'm just joking (or am I?)


Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

Man this is really getting interesting. I honestly don't quite know how to feel with everything. Honestly things are getting pretty fucking depressing, especially after seeing Annabelle's friends giving up on her existence and poor Chloe... 

I still am enjoying it but I don't know how much more misery I can take from my poor shrinkie girl. Even with the little moments with Nel, which were super heartwarming and a nice reprieve from all the emotional abuse, they only lasted so long. I really hope we get more of her, would be awesome if we got Annabelle imprinting on her of all people. 

I already want these two new shrinkies to fuck off completely. Like they're clearly going to be showing "Poppy" how she "should" be behaving and respecting her captors. I think the hardest part is Annabelle not having a SINGLE person she can talk to. Like usually in these stories there's at least one character the protagonist can confide in. 

Sad about Harper's probation also, out of all the giantesses she is the only one who does seem to genuinely care for her even if it's for superficial reasons on the surface. 

Great story still, definitely going to keep reading but I do hope we get some nice things for Annabelle at some point soon, I don't know how much more my heart can take. 



Author's Response:

Oh god Huggler, I'm right there with you. The thing is, I'm going based on my outline, so sometimes I can forget that you guys are reading this in real time. Your comment made me re-read the last ten chapters and, Jesus, it's dark sometimes lol. But I can promise that it won't be all bad in the upcoming chapters. 

That being said, if you're reading my comment after you've read chapter 24, then you have to know how much I was grinning reading your comment about Annabelle not having a single person to confide in. Sometimes I swear I must've accidently published my outline as a chapter, because sometimes you guys are like a whole chapter ahead of me.  

Thanks again for the astute comment, Huggler!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

If I am not mistaken, it was stated that there are only 200 type 0 in the world... so I’ve thought about it in the past, it was just a vague feeling, but this last 3 chapters made me more sure that Annabelle/Poppy IS NOT JUST A TYPE 0.

It’s cannon that people imprint on Annabelle/Poppy, but it’s the other way around with Cookie and Bitsy. They display the same unweavering happiness and loyalty Rachel displayed for Anna. Moreover, their owners are clearly uncaring, not displaying any concern if they get hurt or not, the exactly opposite of the FF towards Annabelle/Poppy.

It makes sense if you think about it. If there was 200 shrinkess who could do what Anna does, someone would have already noticed. Moreover, Anna’s mother is still shrouded in misteries. As I said, I think the story is progressing towards establishing Poppy as a true different being.

This different being will be seeing as the most precious thing on Earth by the imprinted ones... and as a vĂ­rus or a tool by those who haven’t imprinted. We can’t forget that Dr. Sano probably got the blood sample she wanted (which is why Annabelle was covered in blood When she meet Nell) and is analysing it.

Yes, she may share some common traits with those type 0, but it’s a new species, a mutation. A dangerous and powerfull one. I can see even Governor Windsor obsessing over it.

With that said, Cookie and Bitsy seem to be very narcisistic and proud of their... status. I don’t think they will help her, but will try to compete with Poppy... and I hope her darker side eat and chew them out. HOW DARE THAT INSECT ADRESS ANNA AS A SISTER? KILL HIM POPPY! KILL THE BASTARD!

Harper and Naomi steal the scene on this chapter. Harper’s over the top feelings make the sex parts even more tense and hot (you are a master teaser making Harper touch Anna’s foot!!).

Naomi, while intense and rough, her hesitation and fear of admitting she loves Poppy, evoke a shyness and cuteness I already felt on other chapters. I guess each one shows affection and desire in a different way, the imprinting maxing those especific traits.

I hope we see something like that with Molly and Nell, they are the most insecure about themselves and Annabelle could pump their self esteem, bonding with them in a steamy way... Like I said in my other comment, I fell Poppy will become like the world to Nell, and she would love to have the world at her feet just like her sister has 😉

About Oliver, most of what we see is Anna’s idealization of him. Well, now we saw a glimpse of how he really is and he is a coward, someone who, in fact, wouldn’t act much different from Nick if he knew what Annabelle became or if put in the same death game from ch. 22. Yeah, he isn’t worth of Annabelle/Poppy - I don’t think any man or shrinkee is.

My God, I might be tripping too Much but those 3 chapters were heavy on plot points and foreshadowing in regards to Poppy’s nature and abilities.

About favorites, I’d say my giantess ranking changed a lot these past months. From top to bottom: 1. Nell and Molly - 2. Harper - 3. Naomi - 4. Leah - 5. Zoey.

AAAHHH!! I too would love to talk more about the plot and characters! Curiosity is killing me! I can’t wait for more of the giantesses development and backstories! Maybe then Annabelle will open up a little to the FF... maybe Nell will appear again... maybe... maybe... too many ideas.

I will have to lay down after this. Maybe read some old chapters again and think.

Thanks for always reading and responding the comments and for sharing your wonderful imagination and characters with us!



Author's Response:

You and your theories, Mr. In a Suit. I remembered you said you haven't written in a while, but have some really innovative ideas. 

Ha! I did mention the foot part because of your comment! 

Don't worry, everyone is going to get a lot of individual time to shine in the chapters coming up--including Molly and Nell. 

Your comments about Oliver always make me laugh--we'll just have to see what he's really made of, huh. 

Lol, I love reading your comment about Annabelle's imprinting abilities after I've just published chapter 24. If you've read it you can see that you're not "tripping". Now I can't confirm or deny if you're right about her imprinting nature--only that it is a plot point.

Thanks for always commenting, Mr. in a Suit! Your reviews are so fun to read!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2021 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

Quite the dirty birdies we've got here, poor Anna was attacked by chemical warfare which is definitely illegal to use on POW'S. I am glad she was able to hold out long enough to be rescued by Harper, it was a nice victory for her in the face of overwhelming odds.

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I had forgotten about the friends with all the extra curriculars about but Chloe seems the ballsy type to challenge our Trustfund Titanesses. I'm sensing nothing good coming from Olier getting involved but perhaps there is a pleasant surprise at the end of this dark hallway.

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Naomi seems a bit more violence laden than the others...well maybe not Leah. That said I do fear for poor Oliver who just wanted to mourn a friend. Something tells me he won't deserve what is coming and neither will Anna.

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Well hot damn, you've thrown another curveball at us. Another sweet dream ruined for poor Anna but now she's waking up to being accosted by two strangers in a room full of people. I am not sure what to think about here but I do have a feeling the tiny lady might be a person of interests for Anna from a few chapters back.

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As for rankings Molly seems likable due to her parents shitting on her etc, like if you got her away from the group she might be a solid human.

Harper is just as lusty as ever and I can't help but love Leah/Naomi due to my own real life inklings into that side of the fence.

That said I would say Molly/Harper MIGHT be higher than the bossier/scarier two only due to family history and in Harper's case her being like an Elmyra Duff of fetish stories.

Author's Response:

Ha! Elymyra Duff is an amazing comparison. And I had to give Annabelle some kind of victory, or I'm pretty sure she'd go insane.

I can't help but wonder if your rankings will change when the giantesses' backstories/ chapters are revealed? Personally, my favorite of the FF is whoever I'm writing at the moment. They're all really fun to write, and I sympathize with them. 

That being said, I'm interested to see how people will respond to Oliver's fate.  

Thanks again Adam, I always like reading your reactions.

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